
3/31/2023 c32 thor94
so may appeared and brock is back.
Also about the collar it is back, i didn't really seen mewtwo put it back on ash neck in the former chapter, and what are the new modification?
Also when do you plan for the ash receive the tight monitoring wrist and ankles cuffs? (if you always plan to use my suggestion).
PS: can't post a review normally since you removed a chapter (likely update note) and i already reviewed ch32, so i post as guest, but you have already have my pseudo to answer in PM
so may appeared and brock is back.
Also about the collar it is back, i didn't really seen mewtwo put it back on ash neck in the former chapter, and what are the new modification?
Also when do you plan for the ash receive the tight monitoring wrist and ankles cuffs? (if you always plan to use my suggestion).
PS: can't post a review normally since you removed a chapter (likely update note) and i already reviewed ch32, so i post as guest, but you have already have my pseudo to answer in PM
3/31/2023 c32
19storyreader21
Nice to see thismupdated. Is it bad I hope May gets captured as well. Probably considering I find myself hoping Mewtwo will have a team including Ash, May, Dawn, and Lillie.(I don't like Misty or Iris)

Nice to see thismupdated. Is it bad I hope May gets captured as well. Probably considering I find myself hoping Mewtwo will have a team including Ash, May, Dawn, and Lillie.(I don't like Misty or Iris)
1/2/2020 c2
3Orchestra Of Order
For Arceus's sake please spell my favorite non-legendary right. Pidgeot is the spelling you are looking for. Thank you.

For Arceus's sake please spell my favorite non-legendary right. Pidgeot is the spelling you are looking for. Thank you.
12/24/2019 c31 thor94
finally an update, like a christmas gift.
So mewtwo is finally upgrade ash collar, can't wait to see what he will add, and if he will put new devices on him (like the permanent bracelets, etc).
And finally mewtwo get rid of that annoying misty to some far place.
Also look we have a new visitor, ask what cynthia will do (after all, what mewtwo do with ash is not different from what humans do with pokemon, and despite the kinky relationship and stuff, ash is not treated bad.
Can't wait next chapters for the new collar and maybe extra permanent new jewelries ash will receive.
Hope next chapter will come very soon
finally an update, like a christmas gift.
So mewtwo is finally upgrade ash collar, can't wait to see what he will add, and if he will put new devices on him (like the permanent bracelets, etc).
And finally mewtwo get rid of that annoying misty to some far place.
Also look we have a new visitor, ask what cynthia will do (after all, what mewtwo do with ash is not different from what humans do with pokemon, and despite the kinky relationship and stuff, ash is not treated bad.
Can't wait next chapters for the new collar and maybe extra permanent new jewelries ash will receive.
Hope next chapter will come very soon
7/16/2019 c30
7DarthLeo
If you like non con, this is the story for you. If you you don't, stay away from this story. if you don't know what non con is, search "define non con" in Google.

If you like non con, this is the story for you. If you you don't, stay away from this story. if you don't know what non con is, search "define non con" in Google.
7/16/2019 c4 DarthLeo
The sudden lemon was distracting and seemingly out of place. It wasn't very well introduced.
The sudden lemon was distracting and seemingly out of place. It wasn't very well introduced.
7/16/2019 c2 DarthLeo
try composing in Google Drive. Google recognizes the names of all Pokemon and will correct you if you misspell the names.
try composing in Google Drive. Google recognizes the names of all Pokemon and will correct you if you misspell the names.
6/26/2019 c30 thor94
interesting that armor, ask what ash can do with it.
Also can't wait for the new permanent collar and bracelets, etc mewtwo will put on ash.
interesting that armor, ask what ash can do with it.
Also can't wait for the new permanent collar and bracelets, etc mewtwo will put on ash.
6/17/2019 c1
1The Unkindness
Thank you for the review on my story. It is rare to see somebody review my story that is not a troll. Dont like yaoi, but dont let that stop you.
Have a nice day

Thank you for the review on my story. It is rare to see somebody review my story that is not a troll. Dont like yaoi, but dont let that stop you.
Have a nice day
4/16/2019 c29 thor94
so more peaceful chapter here.
Yep finally misty is definitely jealous.
Can't wait for next chapters (hope will be updated soon) and ash receive all his new permanent devices
so more peaceful chapter here.
Yep finally misty is definitely jealous.
Can't wait for next chapters (hope will be updated soon) and ash receive all his new permanent devices