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2/27 c1 Grammar Nazi
Great story, but the grammar is shit. And use quotation marks when a certain character speaks, it gets very confusing and you even managed to spell ‘knees’ wrong.
12/17/2019 c1 T. S.Smith
Now, I just have to applaud you for mixing two superbly different things, and making a fanfic.
I'm impressed.
12/4/2017 c1 Guest
Continue, but please work on the typing.
10/30/2017 c1 Jaden
Can you continue the story
7/15/2017 c1 Guest
Please update
2/19/2017 c1 Guest
Please continue
1/24/2017 c1 2headreviewer mk2
please continue
12/24/2016 c1 Guest
Love it
11/20/2016 c1 2predator1701
Just one Mis typed word, I've read other good ones with more than that, Great Job on both spelling and writing.

If you ever get a chance to update this please do so.
11/10/2016 c1 Woods
So far so good. Liked how you started off. But grammer needs work, especially the dialogue. And add some more detail, other than that ill be waiting for the next chapter.

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