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24PocketSevens
You're right...it is very dark. However, it plays so much into Nessa's character. I was saddened to see her character darken in the musical...she could have been so much more than who she became.
So glad to see you back. I hope you have been well.
24PocketSevensYou're right...it is very dark. However, it plays so much into Nessa's character. I was saddened to see her character darken in the musical...she could have been so much more than who she became.
So glad to see you back. I hope you have been well.
11/2/2016 c1 173HC247
Good work! Interesting perception of Nessa and Boq-s relationship. You can almost feel Nessa's struggle here between acknowledging reality and wanting to stay in a fantasy. It's heart wrenching for her.
I also like how you tied in the WWOTE scene with the ending lines. It seems like this could have preceded what we see on stage in the show.
Well done, friend! Good to see you writing again!
173HC247Good work! Interesting perception of Nessa and Boq-s relationship. You can almost feel Nessa's struggle here between acknowledging reality and wanting to stay in a fantasy. It's heart wrenching for her.
I also like how you tied in the WWOTE scene with the ending lines. It seems like this could have preceded what we see on stage in the show.
Well done, friend! Good to see you writing again!
11/2/2016 c1 James Birdsong
Excellent
Excellent
11/2/2016 c1 109Fae'sFlower
Great job! I liked how you portrayed Nessa and Boq and how you used the musical lines at the end.
Great oneshot!
109Fae'sFlowerGreat job! I liked how you portrayed Nessa and Boq and how you used the musical lines at the end.
Great oneshot!