3/4/2023 c1 Guest
The part where Chara and Asriel came and toriel and ashore saw them was rather emotional
And the way everyone's new jobs were described was just perfect
The part where Chara and Asriel came and toriel and ashore saw them was rather emotional
And the way everyone's new jobs were described was just perfect
4/19/2018 c6 Blacksword 1
Great job so far looking forward to frisk taking down her mom and finding peace. Maybe chara and asriel can help her fight. But this is your story so it's up to you
Great job so far looking forward to frisk taking down her mom and finding peace. Maybe chara and asriel can help her fight. But this is your story so it's up to you
8/18/2017 c4 GrandKingBear
I just finished all the chapters and they all were sooooo amazing and wonderfully written! I did notice some spelling errors in some chapters but it didn't take away from the experience. I understand you, in that I also struggle a lot with disloctating yourself from your surroundings. I just want to tell you that your family, friends, and supports are all a big help in life and if you ever need help then you should ask them because it helps so much. It helped me when I was having suicidal thought and I immediately told my family and got the help I needed. Hang in there and I look forward to your next chapter.
I just finished all the chapters and they all were sooooo amazing and wonderfully written! I did notice some spelling errors in some chapters but it didn't take away from the experience. I understand you, in that I also struggle a lot with disloctating yourself from your surroundings. I just want to tell you that your family, friends, and supports are all a big help in life and if you ever need help then you should ask them because it helps so much. It helped me when I was having suicidal thought and I immediately told my family and got the help I needed. Hang in there and I look forward to your next chapter.
8/13/2017 c4 Guest
Good to know I'm not the only one who feels that kind of emptiness feeling
Other than that it's great to know that you're getting back on your feet with these stories
Good to know I'm not the only one who feels that kind of emptiness feeling
Other than that it's great to know that you're getting back on your feet with these stories
1/28/2017 c1 agdjdpekxb
This story breaks the rules of FFN. FFN does not accept MA content. Please delete this or I will report it.
This story breaks the rules of FFN. FFN does not accept MA content. Please delete this or I will report it.
12/21/2016 c3 Guest
Hey when are u planning on updating next
Hey when are u planning on updating next
12/11/2016 c3 Guest
When r u going to update?
When r u going to update?
11/22/2016 c3 Bob
Great job sorry if I upset you I didn't know you were ill
Great job sorry if I upset you I didn't know you were ill
11/18/2016 c2 Bob
I thought you said you would update this on Thursdays
I thought you said you would update this on Thursdays
11/6/2016 c1 7Viana D'Ascolli
This is awesome! :D I love your fanfictions, but how old are chara, asriel and frisk?
This is awesome! :D I love your fanfictions, but how old are chara, asriel and frisk?