for Into the Night3/24 c14 PleaseUseMyIdeas
Damn, rereading this again and still great. Can't wait for the next chapter
Damn, rereading this again and still great. Can't wait for the next chapter
3/8 c1 Guest
Are you going to continue with your Hero Amongst Shinobi story or is that dead.
UlforceGreymon
Are you going to continue with your Hero Amongst Shinobi story or is that dead.
UlforceGreymon
3/5 c2 Guest
Screw the Color Naming Rule
SNPR literally sounds like Sniper, it actually fits with Shirou/Archer so much it's unsettling lmao
It's also a nice way to say that Shirou doesn't abide by Ozpin's rules or laws, kinda like Ironwood
SNIPER (SNPR) FOR THE WIN, fuck colors )
Screw the Color Naming Rule
SNPR literally sounds like Sniper, it actually fits with Shirou/Archer so much it's unsettling lmao
It's also a nice way to say that Shirou doesn't abide by Ozpin's rules or laws, kinda like Ironwood
SNIPER (SNPR) FOR THE WIN, fuck colors )
2/27 c14 VinniTheP00h
Nice touch with the fireworks - really makes Torchwick seem like a fun and self-confident asshole he is (damn I want a fic with good and fun Torchwick as a fully fledged antagonist).
Also, Yulia... Her name is kinda hard to read for anglophones (and even to russophones, with how vague translit can be), and it is not even grammatically correct (nevermind male surname with female character, it happens often IRL with emigrants, but patronim as part of the surname?). But hey, I think it is first pseudo-Russian RWBY character I've seen, so props!
Nice touch with the fireworks - really makes Torchwick seem like a fun and self-confident asshole he is (damn I want a fic with good and fun Torchwick as a fully fledged antagonist).
Also, Yulia... Her name is kinda hard to read for anglophones (and even to russophones, with how vague translit can be), and it is not even grammatically correct (nevermind male surname with female character, it happens often IRL with emigrants, but patronim as part of the surname?). But hey, I think it is first pseudo-Russian RWBY character I've seen, so props!
2/24 c14 DragonB0b
Neo has the ability to make illusions, which shatter when damaged. But those illusions are perfect and she uses them so well, jumping from place to place while invisible so it looks like teleportation, and never using her illusions in an obvious manner.
Neo has the ability to make illusions, which shatter when damaged. But those illusions are perfect and she uses them so well, jumping from place to place while invisible so it looks like teleportation, and never using her illusions in an obvious manner.
12/21 c14 Neoyle
Man, awesome chapter...!
This is one of the few novels where I'm actually rooting for a harem ending between those three, to be it fair it would be really bittersweet and heart-breaking to see one of them lose (Plus Remnant is already post-apocalyptic enough, I'm sure they wouldn't mind polygamy as long as it's consentual.)
About the team name of SNPR, what about Scarlet...?
It fits the Color Naming Rule just right, plus it's meaning is usually devotion, courage, passion and sacrifice.
Basically OUS Shirou lol.
Man, awesome chapter...!
This is one of the few novels where I'm actually rooting for a harem ending between those three, to be it fair it would be really bittersweet and heart-breaking to see one of them lose (Plus Remnant is already post-apocalyptic enough, I'm sure they wouldn't mind polygamy as long as it's consentual.)
About the team name of SNPR, what about Scarlet...?
It fits the Color Naming Rule just right, plus it's meaning is usually devotion, courage, passion and sacrifice.
Basically OUS Shirou lol.
2/18 c14 Guest
You have your story labeled [Shirou Pyrrha] but you have me cheering for [Shirou Blake] with all that adorable fluff
You have your story labeled [Shirou Pyrrha] but you have me cheering for [Shirou Blake] with all that adorable fluff