for HS DxD: Who R U (On Hold)7/21/2019 c8 Guest
You should do a Risa betrayed story when Issei makes her a pawn when he hits high class.
You should do a Risa betrayed story when Issei makes her a pawn when he hits high class.
7/19/2019 c7 
3Gundam Wing Zero
I think it could have used a little more detailed of where and how enemies were defeated.
3Gundam Wing ZeroI think it could have used a little more detailed of where and how enemies were defeated.
7/19/2019 c6 Gundam Wing Zero
I would have gone more into details on training. Also it needed s/less like a list and more like a story.
I would have gone more into details on training. Also it needed s/less like a list and more like a story.
7/19/2019 c5 Gundam Wing Zero
Just like your other story, I think you needed to introduced Dbraig early on, before having him randomly talking.
Just like your other story, I think you needed to introduced Dbraig early on, before having him randomly talking.
7/19/2019 c4 Gundam Wing Zero
This was far from rushed, but I think this chapter was on the funny side.
This was far from rushed, but I think this chapter was on the funny side.
7/19/2019 c2 Gundam Wing Zero
It's a little funny at the end, but man that most have been some punch.
It's a little funny at the end, but man that most have been some punch.
3/24/2018 c7 Hero100100
I think Raynare and the two female fallen angels that he brings back becomes 3 of his Pawn pieces when Issei becomes a high-level you use my ideas that I think would be a good idea for this story of course that is up to you but I hope you will use them.
I think Raynare and the two female fallen angels that he brings back becomes 3 of his Pawn pieces when Issei becomes a high-level you use my ideas that I think would be a good idea for this story of course that is up to you but I hope you will use them.
3/24/2018 c7 Hero100100
it's been over 3 months can you please give us another story is getting really good.I like the one piece attacks you have been giving to at the winning the Raiders game issei becomes a mid-level demon making him closer to his what if issei says he wants to try to bring people back from the dead issei wants to see how powerful he actually is turns out he can't bring everyone back from the dead turns out his power to bring people back from the dead all the exact same as the dragon balls of can only use it once a year and he can bring three people back a he brings back the 2 female fallen angels that rias has killed to test his him with one extra person he can bring back within that year.
it's been over 3 months can you please give us another story is getting really good.I like the one piece attacks you have been giving to at the winning the Raiders game issei becomes a mid-level demon making him closer to his what if issei says he wants to try to bring people back from the dead issei wants to see how powerful he actually is turns out he can't bring everyone back from the dead turns out his power to bring people back from the dead all the exact same as the dragon balls of can only use it once a year and he can bring three people back a he brings back the 2 female fallen angels that rias has killed to test his him with one extra person he can bring back within that year.
12/9/2017 c7 Bvvlaze
Dude...during the countdown at 17 you said they fought for 5 minutes then the countdown went to 16...
Dude...during the countdown at 17 you said they fought for 5 minutes then the countdown went to 16...
12/9/2017 c7 a guy
wondering why grayfia she is a mom and happily married to sirzechs and I want more
wondering why grayfia she is a mom and happily married to sirzechs and I want more
12/9/2017 c7 2Xerzo LotCN
ok whatever who every won won ok then
so that arc is done nice fights iron body broke chainsaws nice and defeating opponents
saving koneko pleasuring a women and using that to distract her to steal her cheat second chance tool thus saving akeno and attracting girls with his display
wow he did that pretty well and him stealing the other without hurting ravel
everyone gang beat up riser to wear him down then using the stolen tears to heal everyone as well as boost the power did they not show off asia healing thus having a ace up their sleeve huh
so what with it saying 20 mins then counting down like 20 seconds but still saying like fighting for longer that very confusing also did he unlock balance breaker or was that the price of giving art of his body to the dragon
though i surprised he just used tempest kicked merged with his dragon shot i think something like the mixed finger pistol tempest blast to make the air gun used by the whole fist (or leg as kicks by default are stronger unless trained) mixed with the dragon shot would have done more damage no kill like overkill as they say
so some nice moments then onto the next arc where we get 2 new harem girls childhood friend who was actually a girl and xenovia who very blunt and direct with wanting issei kids as her new goal in life after finding out god was dead
so i wonder how kokabiel going down hopefully by issei and not vali
2Xerzo LotCNok whatever who every won won ok then
so that arc is done nice fights iron body broke chainsaws nice and defeating opponents
saving koneko pleasuring a women and using that to distract her to steal her cheat second chance tool thus saving akeno and attracting girls with his display
wow he did that pretty well and him stealing the other without hurting ravel
everyone gang beat up riser to wear him down then using the stolen tears to heal everyone as well as boost the power did they not show off asia healing thus having a ace up their sleeve huh
so what with it saying 20 mins then counting down like 20 seconds but still saying like fighting for longer that very confusing also did he unlock balance breaker or was that the price of giving art of his body to the dragon
though i surprised he just used tempest kicked merged with his dragon shot i think something like the mixed finger pistol tempest blast to make the air gun used by the whole fist (or leg as kicks by default are stronger unless trained) mixed with the dragon shot would have done more damage no kill like overkill as they say
so some nice moments then onto the next arc where we get 2 new harem girls childhood friend who was actually a girl and xenovia who very blunt and direct with wanting issei kids as her new goal in life after finding out god was dead
so i wonder how kokabiel going down hopefully by issei and not vali
12/9/2017 c7 darth56
that was a great fight you did so diff. from any i have read and it was a great read you have issei as a strong person and that is how i like it him being weak is such an over used thing this is a great sounding story and you are doing a fine job of story telling please keep it up and thank you for your time spend writing this for us to read
that was a great fight you did so diff. from any i have read and it was a great read you have issei as a strong person and that is how i like it him being weak is such an over used thing this is a great sounding story and you are doing a fine job of story telling please keep it up and thank you for your time spend writing this for us to read