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I love Feli here, specially near the end when he told Antonio a bastard. Nice Fic
I love Feli here, specially near the end when he told Antonio a bastard. Nice Fic
11/13/2016 c1 i never went to oovoo javer
I LOVE THIS
I just finished reading Like All Things, It Ends and this really explains Feli's issues and happiness well. :)
I headcanon Feli to be a lot mentally stronger than he is shown to be, brave and pure. Maybe I'll write a fic about that.
AGAIN, THIS IS GREAT
I LOVE THIS
I just finished reading Like All Things, It Ends and this really explains Feli's issues and happiness well. :)
I headcanon Feli to be a lot mentally stronger than he is shown to be, brave and pure. Maybe I'll write a fic about that.
AGAIN, THIS IS GREAT
11/5/2016 c1 
20CodeVassie
Saaaaannnndddd! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
Ahhhhhhh. I don't know what to say. For one, you've stabbed my heart and dug up old wounds. Seeing this in Feli's POV is so interesting because he knows so much more about the situation than the perspectives I always wrote from. Antonio did not know much of the situation for much of the story, relying on Lovino to tell him, so naturally, his information came quite slowly and vaguely. Lovino was biased toward the situation because his guilt and other things blinded him.
This shows that Feliciano was affected just as much as Lovino was in the aftermath of their mother's death. He was young enough to not quite understand the extent of it, yet as he tells of his life after, we see that his brother's condition and the learning of what truly happened to their mother shaped his life in ways that we didn't get to see in LATIE.
I love how we got to see the 'protective brother' side of Feliciano as well as a more serious side too. He understands his brother, possibly more than any single person out there and it shows how even those not directly affected by mental disorder are still subject to its ripples and can make mistakes in helping those with it overcome it. He wanted to help his brother, but, like in so many cases, he had no idea how.
I like how you included a reference to Avatar, adding some lightness to the dark past Feliciano was contemplating and how this ended on a cheery note with everyone together for Christmas (as well as a kind of humorous one when Feliciano threatens Antonio).
I think you summed up the family's journey in an excellent way. Thank you so much for writing this perspective of my story and it is absolutely great! I am so honored *wipes metaphorical tear from eye*.
Sorry for such a long review, I just had so much to say in regards to this. Thank you so much, Sand!
20CodeVassieSaaaaannnndddd! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
Ahhhhhhh. I don't know what to say. For one, you've stabbed my heart and dug up old wounds. Seeing this in Feli's POV is so interesting because he knows so much more about the situation than the perspectives I always wrote from. Antonio did not know much of the situation for much of the story, relying on Lovino to tell him, so naturally, his information came quite slowly and vaguely. Lovino was biased toward the situation because his guilt and other things blinded him.
This shows that Feliciano was affected just as much as Lovino was in the aftermath of their mother's death. He was young enough to not quite understand the extent of it, yet as he tells of his life after, we see that his brother's condition and the learning of what truly happened to their mother shaped his life in ways that we didn't get to see in LATIE.
I love how we got to see the 'protective brother' side of Feliciano as well as a more serious side too. He understands his brother, possibly more than any single person out there and it shows how even those not directly affected by mental disorder are still subject to its ripples and can make mistakes in helping those with it overcome it. He wanted to help his brother, but, like in so many cases, he had no idea how.
I like how you included a reference to Avatar, adding some lightness to the dark past Feliciano was contemplating and how this ended on a cheery note with everyone together for Christmas (as well as a kind of humorous one when Feliciano threatens Antonio).
I think you summed up the family's journey in an excellent way. Thank you so much for writing this perspective of my story and it is absolutely great! I am so honored *wipes metaphorical tear from eye*.
Sorry for such a long review, I just had so much to say in regards to this. Thank you so much, Sand!