for Powerful Bosses11/14/2016 c1 Marcus Santora
Could be the start of something interesting but here is a tip, try to space your dialogue so its not too jumbled up together and also try to show the reader who is talking more effectively.
If you need an example I'm an amateur writer myself and you can look at my story on my account to see what i mean, its up to you.
Work as best you can to detail and make the story lively but also flow without making the reader think to hard to understand your writing style.
Could be the start of something interesting but here is a tip, try to space your dialogue so its not too jumbled up together and also try to show the reader who is talking more effectively.
If you need an example I'm an amateur writer myself and you can look at my story on my account to see what i mean, its up to you.
Work as best you can to detail and make the story lively but also flow without making the reader think to hard to understand your writing style.