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7/16/2017 c1 5LadyMuis
This broke my heart. Always I have thought Severus deserved more than a cold shoulder. You described perfectly how I would have imagined thing happening in the entire 'mudblood' incident. Severus all brave but cunning in keeping his enemies closer than his friends. Why couldn't Lily see this, she was supposed to be smart right? This really made me feel for Severus, amazing!
11/11/2016 c1 Guest
Great story, I like it ! It's short but it's just enough !

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11/10/2016 c1 2This Fangirling Muggle
Wow. This is sad and very realistic. I've always thought that Lily did the right thing, there's only so much you can do to help a person, and you can't change them unless they are willing to change. She ended a friendship that was bad for her. But I still feel bad for Snape, because he lost what I feel was the only real friendship he ever had, and he knows it's his fault. The only issue I have with this story, isn't even really an issue, but I'm not sure that Snape got the mark until after he graduated. I'm not sure if it's canon, so I suppose he could have got the mark earlier, but I really have always believed it didn't happen until at least his 7th year or until after graduation.

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