for The Lady of Symmetry12/29/2016 c2 Laughing Shadows6
So far this story is entertaining. What I'm wondering though, is how she knows Haruhi is a girl, 'cause if I'm being honest, that's a Mary-sue trait for this fandom. Not trying to seem rude, truly, but like you I am a writer and I like giving and receiving constructive criticism.
So far this story is entertaining. What I'm wondering though, is how she knows Haruhi is a girl, 'cause if I'm being honest, that's a Mary-sue trait for this fandom. Not trying to seem rude, truly, but like you I am a writer and I like giving and receiving constructive criticism.
11/16/2016 c2 Ehhhhh11
I enjoy Lady Alula's personality so far in this story. You also captured all of the host's personalities quite well.
I enjoy Lady Alula's personality so far in this story. You also captured all of the host's personalities quite well.