for The Dragon Boy Who Sang12/2/2016 c3 MMM
you only wrote the code you may want to fix that?
you only wrote the code you may want to fix that?
12/2/2016 c3 Guest
Just wanted to let you know that the formatting screwed up when you posted and now it's almost unreadable. Almost. I did read it. It's quite clever that Dragon Soul/Hiccup resorted to drawing when he didn't know enough words for a proper explaination.
Just wanted to let you know that the formatting screwed up when you posted and now it's almost unreadable. Almost. I did read it. It's quite clever that Dragon Soul/Hiccup resorted to drawing when he didn't know enough words for a proper explaination.
12/4/2016 c3 
31kittycat1810
Something is really wrong with the formatting of chapter 3, just so you know.
31kittycat1810Something is really wrong with the formatting of chapter 3, just so you know.
12/3/2016 c3 CartoonLoverBecky
Huh... O.o
Cool story! But I think there's a tiny little problem with your chapter...
~Becky
Huh... O.o
Cool story! But I think there's a tiny little problem with your chapter...
~Becky
12/3/2016 c3 AuroraNova46
the coding and stuff is filling the chapter and its hard to read the chapter its self
the coding and stuff is filling the chapter and its hard to read the chapter its self
12/3/2016 c3 5CdnChrgr
The story has been good so far, but you seemed to have made the same mistake I did in my fanfic once. If you could fix it I'd love to read more
5CdnChrgrThe story has been good so far, but you seemed to have made the same mistake I did in my fanfic once. If you could fix it I'd love to read more
12/2/2016 c3 Plantsneedwater
um, the text is all in code with a few sentences and font names stuck in it
um, the text is all in code with a few sentences and font names stuck in it
11/25/2016 c2 Guest
gobbie?
gobbie?
11/19/2016 c2 Superhyper2639
Please write more, I love this!
Please write more, I love this!
11/20/2016 c2 AuroraNova46
more more more. this is amazing and its good to see people still writing about how to train your dragon, you dont find too many that are still being worked on but i think its great. You should write longer chapters. Keep up the great work. :)
more more more. this is amazing and its good to see people still writing about how to train your dragon, you dont find too many that are still being worked on but i think its great. You should write longer chapters. Keep up the great work. :)
11/19/2016 c2 13iiKiwiliciousii
I love how you remade the part in the movie where hiccup gains toothless' trust but with toothless as hiccup very cute i like it update
13iiKiwiliciousiiI love how you remade the part in the movie where hiccup gains toothless' trust but with toothless as hiccup very cute i like it update
11/19/2016 c2 4ToxicGirlfriend
Awwwww this is so cute! A small criticism, when writing dialogue, for every new speaker a new paragraph starts, it is easier to understand who is speaking the. But other than that, this is a great story! Please continue, I'll be disappointed if you didn't.
4ToxicGirlfriendAwwwww this is so cute! A small criticism, when writing dialogue, for every new speaker a new paragraph starts, it is easier to understand who is speaking the. But other than that, this is a great story! Please continue, I'll be disappointed if you didn't.