for Rise of Leviathan12/18/2016 c5 
1BrokenLifeCycle
Only complaint here is how short the chapters are. But if it means more frequent updates, I guess I'll be sated.
1BrokenLifeCycleOnly complaint here is how short the chapters are. But if it means more frequent updates, I guess I'll be sated.
12/18/2016 c5 2FADM Nova Of The Fleets
I am loving your work so far. But do you think it would be possible to post longer chapters?
2FADM Nova Of The FleetsI am loving your work so far. But do you think it would be possible to post longer chapters?
12/3/2016 c4 ZeroNu
So I want to see what the Ship Girls have to say on how Leviathan and her Admiral died.
So I want to see what the Ship Girls have to say on how Leviathan and her Admiral died.
12/2/2016 c4 OH YEAAA
Wow, Great writing quality! No grammatical errors to speak of that I can see. I hope this continues! You should also consider posting this on and if you want to see more reviews, comments and helpfull encouragment! :)
Wow, Great writing quality! No grammatical errors to speak of that I can see. I hope this continues! You should also consider posting this on and if you want to see more reviews, comments and helpfull encouragment! :)
12/2/2016 c4 ARcan
So she retain its SOIEV bays, that means very bad news to an abyssal installation type.
So she retain its SOIEV bays, that means very bad news to an abyssal installation type.
12/2/2016 c4 3Siphon 117
Loving this so far. The Abysalls are going to have a rude awakening when Leviathan enters the battlefield.
3Siphon 117Loving this so far. The Abysalls are going to have a rude awakening when Leviathan enters the battlefield.
11/28/2016 c3 Old steamer
This is a great concept in a category that barely receives any attention though it does seem like you're rushing through this a bit that's all I can actually say at the moment.
This is a great concept in a category that barely receives any attention though it does seem like you're rushing through this a bit that's all I can actually say at the moment.
11/21/2016 c3 Fire of the Void
This is very unique and I like this a lot I don't think that something like this has been done.
This is very unique and I like this a lot I don't think that something like this has been done.
11/18/2016 c3 Dra'ka'do
huh, a slightly darker aspect of a halo/ kancolle, however really like what has happened and the back stories thus far. Little short chapters but meh that's fine, well done so far .
-Dra'ka'do
huh, a slightly darker aspect of a halo/ kancolle, however really like what has happened and the back stories thus far. Little short chapters but meh that's fine, well done so far .
-Dra'ka'do
11/14/2016 c3 Guest
Hey this is pretty good! Keep it up my man!
Hey this is pretty good! Keep it up my man!