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Interesting concept. You could use more details though. Think of it as showing us what's going on not just telling us. And I'd say this chapter would be better suited as being part of the first.
Interesting concept. You could use more details though. Think of it as showing us what's going on not just telling us. And I'd say this chapter would be better suited as being part of the first.