for Rising Tide9/28/2021 c5 valhalan guardsman
and an idiot of a MC too. because of course anyone would trust a xeno whore and it's "god" and allow them to breach the security of one's mind
and an idiot of a MC too. because of course anyone would trust a xeno whore and it's "god" and allow them to breach the security of one's mind
9/28/2021 c2 valhalan guardsman
chess? really? I mean, it's not the worst thing to be upset about but still, it's not a space hulk match on the viking feast table where a considerable number of luck along side skill and nerves are included. in chess if you are beaten it's fair and square, no fuss no puss
chess? really? I mean, it's not the worst thing to be upset about but still, it's not a space hulk match on the viking feast table where a considerable number of luck along side skill and nerves are included. in chess if you are beaten it's fair and square, no fuss no puss
11/18/2016 c5 Reasonable man
Well.. This fic is far more better in quality than your previous one. I wonder how you will progress further.
All fics in this fandom is about "Good Side" characters of this game. Most interraction between Abyssals happens only in battles and any other things are left in suspence. It will be very interesting to read this "inversed" fic. I really want to read about Abyssals feelings and thoughts. You should also write things about their society and hierarchy. There are a lot of things that you can write:
Do they have some form of culture?
Are their bases work together as one faction or are they fight against each other?
Why they started to war against humans?
I hope you will concentrate more on Abyssals.
Well.. This fic is far more better in quality than your previous one. I wonder how you will progress further.
All fics in this fandom is about "Good Side" characters of this game. Most interraction between Abyssals happens only in battles and any other things are left in suspence. It will be very interesting to read this "inversed" fic. I really want to read about Abyssals feelings and thoughts. You should also write things about their society and hierarchy. There are a lot of things that you can write:
Do they have some form of culture?
Are their bases work together as one faction or are they fight against each other?
Why they started to war against humans?
I hope you will concentrate more on Abyssals.
11/16/2016 c4 Wertra
Writer i gonna say that this is like your novel got upgrade the writing is better the story slower which is nice have a explanation of surrounding the interaction of character is more natural than last one hope you dont drop like last one
Writer i gonna say that this is like your novel got upgrade the writing is better the story slower which is nice have a explanation of surrounding the interaction of character is more natural than last one hope you dont drop like last one
11/16/2016 c1 Wertra
Your writing is better thsn last time from the first glance i read i wish your keep doing the good write
Your writing is better thsn last time from the first glance i read i wish your keep doing the good write
11/15/2016 c5 
9cko2
Intresting start tho this rewrite and it seems to be different then the last one at least. Still a little early to be able to get an understanding of daniel, though I am surpized he did not use a made up name this time.
9cko2Intresting start tho this rewrite and it seems to be different then the last one at least. Still a little early to be able to get an understanding of daniel, though I am surpized he did not use a made up name this time.
11/15/2016 c1 1BrokenLifeCycle
I wish this fic good luck and a better run than its predecessor. Is it safe to assume smoother sailing on this one than the last?
1BrokenLifeCycleI wish this fic good luck and a better run than its predecessor. Is it safe to assume smoother sailing on this one than the last?