for Kaleid Liner Stardust Illya!7/31/2023 c8 
1FoxMan888
I enjoyed it while it lasted. Hope it comes back. Illya coming face to face with DIO would be a treat, but I think the deaths of some of the crusaders would’ve broken her.
1FoxMan888I enjoyed it while it lasted. Hope it comes back. Illya coming face to face with DIO would be a treat, but I think the deaths of some of the crusaders would’ve broken her.
8/25/2021 c8 2Anellia Sorsogon
Dang, just when things were heating up. Illya speedrunning the trauma process with three older brothers, a grandpa and an obnoxious partner to support her seemed like an interesting concept. And man, if they actually reached DIO, I wonder how it would've played out. Not to mention the temporal-dimensional travel reveal since Illya already realized that she is nowhere near her time period. Will she be stuck or will Ruby something out of her nonexistent wand bottom? So many possibilities of this fic ahu
2Anellia SorsogonDang, just when things were heating up. Illya speedrunning the trauma process with three older brothers, a grandpa and an obnoxious partner to support her seemed like an interesting concept. And man, if they actually reached DIO, I wonder how it would've played out. Not to mention the temporal-dimensional travel reveal since Illya already realized that she is nowhere near her time period. Will she be stuck or will Ruby something out of her nonexistent wand bottom? So many possibilities of this fic ahu
5/7/2021 c1 Grimm Magician
Oh... you're doing the "Magical Girl" one...
Yeah, I absolutely hate "Magical Girls", so I'm outta here.
Oh... you're doing the "Magical Girl" one...
Yeah, I absolutely hate "Magical Girls", so I'm outta here.
2/29/2020 c2 5Soulless Anti-Hero
The funny thing is, I was planning to write a story like this.
Looks like you beat me.
You should check out my one story...
5Soulless Anti-HeroThe funny thing is, I was planning to write a story like this.
Looks like you beat me.
You should check out my one story...
9/14/2019 c8 Lovnag
You know, this almost feels like justice for that brutality that was done upon poor Shirou in the first chapters.
You know, this almost feels like justice for that brutality that was done upon poor Shirou in the first chapters.
6/21/2019 c8 6King of Fans
Good character
Illiya finally takes action action.
Sure stands are extremely dangerous and can passes some pretty dangerous abilities, but most stands cannot enhance physical abilities of the user, or firer powerful energy blast.
However, ruby and illiya have A great deal of physical upgrades, and rang of abilities that normal stand users can not compete against.
Too bad I was hoping for Illiya to catch up on what they are saying, or ruby to get on the hype train with come up with complements. Seeing everyone’s reaction to the young girl flirt with a older woman would be funny.
If illiya continues to use her abilities she could suffer some permanent damage and have a lot of explaining to do.
Luckily there are plenty of stands that can fix her problems and the Joestars are would more than willing to help her.
Illiya’s parents have sacrificed too much for there daughter to have have to see and do such things. That’s why her father pleased horrors of the world on himself to prevent anyone from seeing it.
If the Mage’s kill pops up I fill sorry for Dio.
I hope you continue because there are so many things you can do.
1.) Iggy using ruby as a chow toy and doggy bag. Come on it’s too funny.
2.) Illya becoming Iggy favorite. Because let’s face it the dog can probably get the girl to give her whatever he wants. All the while Illya would be hard pressed to not fall in love with the dog.
3.) do to Illya’s ability to fly and create barriers, she could sneak up and knocked out the blind stand user in there next fight.
Heck with the assassin card installed she could take out without making a sound.
4.) when they are fighting the stand Anubis Illia could pull out saber to fight at epic sword fight.
Not to mention the stand noticing the quality and power of the sword she holds.
Or she can just use Maria Antoinette to get Anubis sword.
5.) during the magnet incident ruby could get stuck on One Joseph to her horror leaving illya unable to transform. Plus illya would be able to look in the women’s restroom with no problem.
6.) when fighting Seth‘s user illya for once would be the older/ bigger then some on her team. That can have some pretty funny stuff.
7.)There are numerous ways you can have the fight go with Seth’s user (the most despicable human being in Jojo):
7A.) you can have Iilya win the fight because The Man find it to humiliating and due to his own personality be i’m willing to use the stands power on a kid that he is 2 feet taller then, especially if Ruby’s stack due to magnetism. This could allow Illya to take charge and take down the guy along with whoever he deaged. Plus she still has the class cards.
7B.) Ruby to the rescue. Ruby would be unaffected by his powers making her able to fight back. Plus even if Illya is reduced to a three year old the power bust Ruby and class cards they give her.
7C.) Assassin Card- any one of the hassans would despise a man who kills children all the time. Given the territory be used there is a chance that someone of the order would appear to kill him.
Heck even if they are simply used in a install, Hassan’s Spirit will be at full power in their aid. Considering all that they would need is one good hit, and the man cannot de age what he cannot find.
7D.) if Illya is reduced far enough back it might erase the seal they have on Illya. Giving the girl access to her full magical power and knowledge of her ancestors. giving her the power to take the man out. Plus it might even temporarily disrupt his stands powers.
7E.) if some of the others show up events can play out differently.
8.) Ilya in pet shop having a Battle in the sky.
9.) if Jack the ripper is the second assassin card. Things could get interesting considering they’re in a different world and Dio knows Jack the Ripper. This can result in the user and Dio receiving memories that they do not have.
All the while one of the two girls would receive the most revealing outfit ever.
10.) The red stone of Asia- this rock acts as a magical object amplifier and Hamon power up. So it’s possible illya could use it to act as a energy supplements so see dose not overextend herself in the world.
Plus Rin and her rival would want such a powerful stone more then Kars, the moment they see it. Leaving them in Joseph’s mercy to get the rock.
11.)Ruby coming up with a method to take down Dio. Considering, her maker is a vampire that under first examination can do everything Dio can and more.
12.) Stands from in between parts and other parts coming in.
With the magical girls involvement Dio might call in some more back up.
Push they can use stands like crazy diamond to fix Illya, or ask funny Valentim to send Illya and her friend home.
Yes I know that President of the United States lived 100 years ago and is in a different universe. However, as long as some version of him has the power to travel to different dimensions anything is possible.
So I hope you continue the story it’s really good.
6King of FansGood character
Illiya finally takes action action.
Sure stands are extremely dangerous and can passes some pretty dangerous abilities, but most stands cannot enhance physical abilities of the user, or firer powerful energy blast.
However, ruby and illiya have A great deal of physical upgrades, and rang of abilities that normal stand users can not compete against.
Too bad I was hoping for Illiya to catch up on what they are saying, or ruby to get on the hype train with come up with complements. Seeing everyone’s reaction to the young girl flirt with a older woman would be funny.
If illiya continues to use her abilities she could suffer some permanent damage and have a lot of explaining to do.
Luckily there are plenty of stands that can fix her problems and the Joestars are would more than willing to help her.
Illiya’s parents have sacrificed too much for there daughter to have have to see and do such things. That’s why her father pleased horrors of the world on himself to prevent anyone from seeing it.
If the Mage’s kill pops up I fill sorry for Dio.
I hope you continue because there are so many things you can do.
1.) Iggy using ruby as a chow toy and doggy bag. Come on it’s too funny.
2.) Illya becoming Iggy favorite. Because let’s face it the dog can probably get the girl to give her whatever he wants. All the while Illya would be hard pressed to not fall in love with the dog.
3.) do to Illya’s ability to fly and create barriers, she could sneak up and knocked out the blind stand user in there next fight.
Heck with the assassin card installed she could take out without making a sound.
4.) when they are fighting the stand Anubis Illia could pull out saber to fight at epic sword fight.
Not to mention the stand noticing the quality and power of the sword she holds.
Or she can just use Maria Antoinette to get Anubis sword.
5.) during the magnet incident ruby could get stuck on One Joseph to her horror leaving illya unable to transform. Plus illya would be able to look in the women’s restroom with no problem.
6.) when fighting Seth‘s user illya for once would be the older/ bigger then some on her team. That can have some pretty funny stuff.
7.)There are numerous ways you can have the fight go with Seth’s user (the most despicable human being in Jojo):
7A.) you can have Iilya win the fight because The Man find it to humiliating and due to his own personality be i’m willing to use the stands power on a kid that he is 2 feet taller then, especially if Ruby’s stack due to magnetism. This could allow Illya to take charge and take down the guy along with whoever he deaged. Plus she still has the class cards.
7B.) Ruby to the rescue. Ruby would be unaffected by his powers making her able to fight back. Plus even if Illya is reduced to a three year old the power bust Ruby and class cards they give her.
7C.) Assassin Card- any one of the hassans would despise a man who kills children all the time. Given the territory be used there is a chance that someone of the order would appear to kill him.
Heck even if they are simply used in a install, Hassan’s Spirit will be at full power in their aid. Considering all that they would need is one good hit, and the man cannot de age what he cannot find.
7D.) if Illya is reduced far enough back it might erase the seal they have on Illya. Giving the girl access to her full magical power and knowledge of her ancestors. giving her the power to take the man out. Plus it might even temporarily disrupt his stands powers.
7E.) if some of the others show up events can play out differently.
8.) Ilya in pet shop having a Battle in the sky.
9.) if Jack the ripper is the second assassin card. Things could get interesting considering they’re in a different world and Dio knows Jack the Ripper. This can result in the user and Dio receiving memories that they do not have.
All the while one of the two girls would receive the most revealing outfit ever.
10.) The red stone of Asia- this rock acts as a magical object amplifier and Hamon power up. So it’s possible illya could use it to act as a energy supplements so see dose not overextend herself in the world.
Plus Rin and her rival would want such a powerful stone more then Kars, the moment they see it. Leaving them in Joseph’s mercy to get the rock.
11.)Ruby coming up with a method to take down Dio. Considering, her maker is a vampire that under first examination can do everything Dio can and more.
12.) Stands from in between parts and other parts coming in.
With the magical girls involvement Dio might call in some more back up.
Push they can use stands like crazy diamond to fix Illya, or ask funny Valentim to send Illya and her friend home.
Yes I know that President of the United States lived 100 years ago and is in a different universe. However, as long as some version of him has the power to travel to different dimensions anything is possible.
So I hope you continue the story it’s really good.
6/21/2019 c7 King of Fans
Good character
I see illiya now has a trauma buddy.
That’s the tricky thing about stands, even the weakest to the strongest stands could be extremely dangerous depending on how well someone uses it.
However, even if you have no abilities if you can outsmart the enemy, or even render there stands power ineffective any normal person can take them out. (although there is a handful of exceptions, like Dio).
I see Ruby has plenty of time in a life or death scenario. Too bad she wasted by getting stuck in a coffee container and getting dressed up for scuba diving gear that’s she doesn’t need.
Why doesn’t that surprise me. Shirou always has good luck getting The best view, and getting with the ladies. However, The opposite it truth when it comes to their reactions and dealing with the aftereffects.
I love the comparisons with the emerald splash to Rin and Luvia’s magic. Powerful, dangerous, Beautiful, expensive, priceless, and useless 90% of the time.
Are you doing at the mansion the girl she’s comparing Jotaro to falling in love with him.
Lastly I bet in the back of illiya’s mind she is learning a lot while on the trip, of life and death.
Good character
I see illiya now has a trauma buddy.
That’s the tricky thing about stands, even the weakest to the strongest stands could be extremely dangerous depending on how well someone uses it.
However, even if you have no abilities if you can outsmart the enemy, or even render there stands power ineffective any normal person can take them out. (although there is a handful of exceptions, like Dio).
I see Ruby has plenty of time in a life or death scenario. Too bad she wasted by getting stuck in a coffee container and getting dressed up for scuba diving gear that’s she doesn’t need.
Why doesn’t that surprise me. Shirou always has good luck getting The best view, and getting with the ladies. However, The opposite it truth when it comes to their reactions and dealing with the aftereffects.
I love the comparisons with the emerald splash to Rin and Luvia’s magic. Powerful, dangerous, Beautiful, expensive, priceless, and useless 90% of the time.
Are you doing at the mansion the girl she’s comparing Jotaro to falling in love with him.
Lastly I bet in the back of illiya’s mind she is learning a lot while on the trip, of life and death.
6/21/2019 c6 King of Fans
Good character
That explains why illia has been eating like saber.
Just like that Ruby has formed an arch enemy contract with Joseph.
Although, have the lethal Dose of a Ox dose sound right to keep him unconscious for a little bit.
I am not going to lie when I say ruby has a point on saying there is a lack a strong male leads in magical girl shows and in fates main male characters.
Excluding Illiya and her father. Fate protagonist have been pretty stale and have as much character as a piece of cardboard. Just look at Sieg, and the male hakuno.
Not to mention the first four JoJo’s have more manliness then any fate character excluding Hercules, iskandar, and kintoki.
Joseph Smart, muscular, rich, and definitely the jester of the group.
Lastly it appears the Stardust crusaders finally have a suitable punching bag for them to practice on.
Good character
That explains why illia has been eating like saber.
Just like that Ruby has formed an arch enemy contract with Joseph.
Although, have the lethal Dose of a Ox dose sound right to keep him unconscious for a little bit.
I am not going to lie when I say ruby has a point on saying there is a lack a strong male leads in magical girl shows and in fates main male characters.
Excluding Illiya and her father. Fate protagonist have been pretty stale and have as much character as a piece of cardboard. Just look at Sieg, and the male hakuno.
Not to mention the first four JoJo’s have more manliness then any fate character excluding Hercules, iskandar, and kintoki.
Joseph Smart, muscular, rich, and definitely the jester of the group.
Lastly it appears the Stardust crusaders finally have a suitable punching bag for them to practice on.