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12/15/2016 c1 pat the man
Honestly this would have been better without the OC, not that I have anything agaonst them but this type of short story works best when it is brief and the introduction of amy serves little purpose and drags it on a tad. Other than that a fun read
11/20/2016 c1 5Demetrion
Well, watch Pyrrha's death twice in a row or almost in a row to write a story - that's a commendable effort.
On a more serious note though, good job. Both plot-wise and writing. It was fun and interesting even if bit predictable. Trademark Skyrim's (and Batman's! wounded knee caused Pyrrha to retire or at least say so) "knee problem" in their full glory. OOCness is there, but on a tolerable level, and, honestly, it fits well in the story, so personally I don't have any problem with it. Bonus points for the last two lines.
All in all, nice short story, well done.
11/15/2016 c1 Sapphire
Great story sis

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