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3/26/2017 c1 550yellow 14
Eh, I review anyway. Please don't try holding the fic hostage, it's offputting.

Overall, a decent little fic. Very cute. Keep writing
12/3/2016 c1 NDMC
Wow. Ok so I was hooked from the first paragraph of this. I loved how you described the atmosphere in the classroom and the little snippets of their relationship. Her thinking of the opinions of her friends and family was great too. I also loved all the questions like "Where did the weight come from? What was the imperishable lump in her throat composed of?" Ugh. I just really loved this. I don't even have the vocabulary to properly convey how much. "She lived and breathed in sin." I love that too. Ok I'm done because I'm just going to start quoting your whole chapter back to you and that would be weird. I look forward to seeing what happens next.
11/17/2016 c1 2Manatocfox
Huh, very interesting. I almost assumed this was a one shot. Very well written for how short it is. Nicely done.

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