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1/7/2017 c8 Rin drowned
great story i love it
for the name how about U~ōtāshīrudo no dansu or dance of the water shield or something else if it's to long like Mizu no odori which means dance of the water
update soon
12/28/2016 c8 RIOSHO
[water god/goddess name]'s Blessing
You can play around with different languages for both to possibly find something that sounds like it would work
12/28/2016 c8 4lizyeh2000
Thanks for updating! Hehe tenzo sure is a sadist
12/28/2016 c8 19Girl-luvs-manga
The road to a powerful ninja is long and filled with strife.
12/28/2016 c8 Ini minnie maini moe
Cool fic!, please continue!
12/28/2016 c8 Moonstar2016
Thank you for the chapter - love the story (it is very different !:) )..
12/23/2016 c7 Guest
This fic is pretty good. I read every oc story I can find these days and yours has a whole new outlook.
12/11/2016 c7 10lady kae
why did the anbu call her haruno?
12/11/2016 c7 1SlytherclawDevin
You made her sensei Tenzo? That's awesome! She'll get better XD
12/3/2016 c7 kuroshitsuji24
this is awesome! How much more chapters will there be...
12/3/2016 c7 Raikaguken
i noticed there are a few times you repeat a sentence or 2
12/2/2016 c7 4lizyeh2000
Thanks for updating! At least she's started good choice with Tenzo! Will we see Kakashi?
12/2/2016 c7 19Girl-luvs-manga
Armor is a good idea. I wonder what Gaara will think when he meets her.
11/28/2016 c6 Ini minnie maini moe
I love this fic!
11/27/2016 c6 mors omnibus
I liked Shikaku's point of view. Update soon! :D
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