
7/3/2018 c4 Guest
Aw! You gotta update!
Aw! You gotta update!
4/22/2017 c1 Sketchistrator1
You might want to change the year that Jason was born in, or else he would be 62 years old, instead of 17. Just a tip.
You might want to change the year that Jason was born in, or else he would be 62 years old, instead of 17. Just a tip.
12/11/2016 c4 Guest
Okay I'm intrigued and am awaiting the next update
Okay I'm intrigued and am awaiting the next update
12/12/2016 c4
1Jake and Larzel
Hi, it's Jake again. I'm even more fascinated by this story than I was before. It's fun reading the character different opinions on things and how each one is dramatically different. I can't wait to read more.

Hi, it's Jake again. I'm even more fascinated by this story than I was before. It's fun reading the character different opinions on things and how each one is dramatically different. I can't wait to read more.
11/20/2016 c2
1Jake and Larzel
Hey, this is Jake. I really am enjoying your story so far. It's interesting and it has a cool concept. Just wondering, will you explain later how each character ended up in prison?
Keep up the good work!

Hey, this is Jake. I really am enjoying your story so far. It's interesting and it has a cool concept. Just wondering, will you explain later how each character ended up in prison?
Keep up the good work!