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12/4/2016 c2 walkerdude1
Great story. Please update soon!
11/30/2016 c1 walkerdude1
Love it. Found a Twitter that mentioned this story.
11/29/2016 c2 DarkRavie
Another great chapter. This story is a terrific read. I really like it. I can't wait to read what happens next.
11/28/2016 c1 614yellow 14
Sigh.

I'm genuinely surprised you have no other reviews...an author of your calibre is seldom short of them.

I'll be honest, I actually have no idea who half these characters are and it does leave me with a sense of disconnection as I read. They keep talking about events that I have no idea about, so I'm left racing behind trying to catch up.

The writing itself isn't bad as such, but...

But the team dynamics are more than a little hard to follow for this outsider. I'm left feeling like I've just been dropped into the middle of a trillogy, not the first chapter of a new story. I'm finding very hard to actually gel and I'm finding this a hard read. Overall, it's far too much legwork from my end, but I will acknowledge that as an outsider to Major Crimes, I'm probably simply not really set up properly for this story.

Sorry, but that's how it plays out for me.
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