
8/10/2018 c1
25blueflower1594
A masterpiece. That’s all I can say. This was an utter MASTERPIECE. The emotions, the writing, the plot, it had my heart in its clutches and wouldn’t let go until I finished reading! Thank you so much for this story!

A masterpiece. That’s all I can say. This was an utter MASTERPIECE. The emotions, the writing, the plot, it had my heart in its clutches and wouldn’t let go until I finished reading! Thank you so much for this story!
11/29/2016 c2
45Gotaru
I... I can't. This... THIS WAS TOO MUCH!
Al... Alphonse, sweetheart. Oh, God...
I mean it, I can't think of ANYTHING to say. This just hurt so much right about now. Way too much.
But this was amazing, NEVER have any doubt about it, okay?
I know I don't.
I'll be damned if this wouldn't end up on my favorites list, so...! :')
I mean it: both stories were equally and incredibly GORGEOUS. Feel totally proud about them. :D

I... I can't. This... THIS WAS TOO MUCH!
Al... Alphonse, sweetheart. Oh, God...
I mean it, I can't think of ANYTHING to say. This just hurt so much right about now. Way too much.
But this was amazing, NEVER have any doubt about it, okay?
I know I don't.
I'll be damned if this wouldn't end up on my favorites list, so...! :')
I mean it: both stories were equally and incredibly GORGEOUS. Feel totally proud about them. :D
11/29/2016 c1 Gotaru
Edward, honey...
Not much to say, but congratule you sincerely because THIS IS Ed. This was him, in every damn word tinted by a combination of that forever-present guilt and the fierce love he holds for Al.
Beautiful, and oh, so painfull...
:')
Edward, honey...
Not much to say, but congratule you sincerely because THIS IS Ed. This was him, in every damn word tinted by a combination of that forever-present guilt and the fierce love he holds for Al.
Beautiful, and oh, so painfull...
:')
11/28/2016 c2
4TheRoseAlchemist17
This chapter is just as great as the first! I can easily imagine Al saying this. The feels in this story! D: I love your writing style!

This chapter is just as great as the first! I can easily imagine Al saying this. The feels in this story! D: I love your writing style!
11/27/2016 c1
40Vitlium
it's great unlike me you understand Ed, I don't I'm better at Al's emotions can't wait for chapter 2

it's great unlike me you understand Ed, I don't I'm better at Al's emotions can't wait for chapter 2
11/27/2016 c1
4TheRoseAlchemist17
This is amazing! So sad, and well-written. Looking forward to reading the next chapter! :)

This is amazing! So sad, and well-written. Looking forward to reading the next chapter! :)