10/20 c4 hennessyswagg83
I know this story is already completed but I thought it would have been funnier if she was a Nekomata (cat-like Yōkai with two tails) instead since "nya" is the sound cats make in anime and Ni is the #2 in Japanese. They are evil, spiteful, and destructive.
I know this story is already completed but I thought it would have been funnier if she was a Nekomata (cat-like Yōkai with two tails) instead since "nya" is the sound cats make in anime and Ni is the #2 in Japanese. They are evil, spiteful, and destructive.
12/1/2023 c3 Guest
"there are no human in nazarick"...the One which control the teleport sistem Is not only human but One of the Seven maid...sigh
"there are no human in nazarick"...the One which control the teleport sistem Is not only human but One of the Seven maid...sigh
11/20/2022 c4 Guest
What does he mean he understands how surreal and horrible it must be? Because I don't. Nothing about this situation is even close to negative for Ninya.
What does he mean he understands how surreal and horrible it must be? Because I don't. Nothing about this situation is even close to negative for Ninya.
11/20/2022 c2 Guest
What does she mean, what his lord has done to her? He brought her back to life. No, he did more than bring her back to life; he brought her back to life and made her better than she was. Not seeing a downside to her situation.
What does she mean, what his lord has done to her? He brought her back to life. No, he did more than bring her back to life; he brought her back to life and made her better than she was. Not seeing a downside to her situation.
5/21/2022 c24 Aboda7m
man idk but I feel like for a while now you have been putting the name "Anya" instead of the name you actually meant... maybe I'm wrong but I feel like one time you meant to say Arisa or Kris but ended up writing Anya instead
one time you said please help Anya; instead of Arisa
and one time you said Anya new armor... twice instead of talking about Anya armor then talking next about kris new armor
well anywa thank you for the good story , so far I have been enjoying it and I reached this far and I will probably continue reading, few misspelling and miss types wont stop me.
thank you again for this story, I really appreciate it and only brought this topic because I felt you might want to check them yourself and correct it if there were indeed mistakes for the sake of new readers
man idk but I feel like for a while now you have been putting the name "Anya" instead of the name you actually meant... maybe I'm wrong but I feel like one time you meant to say Arisa or Kris but ended up writing Anya instead
one time you said please help Anya; instead of Arisa
and one time you said Anya new armor... twice instead of talking about Anya armor then talking next about kris new armor
well anywa thank you for the good story , so far I have been enjoying it and I reached this far and I will probably continue reading, few misspelling and miss types wont stop me.
thank you again for this story, I really appreciate it and only brought this topic because I felt you might want to check them yourself and correct it if there were indeed mistakes for the sake of new readers
10/31/2021 c33 8zakan
This was a pretty good story, not every thing was of my taste but that does not reduce its quality.
This was a pretty good story, not every thing was of my taste but that does not reduce its quality.
10/10/2021 c11 max111000
Hi, I kind of like adding clementine to the mix. I hope the story will take a darker turn b/c all smiles bone dady, flowers and sunshine is getting boring. I cant wait for the tsunare arc :)
Hi, I kind of like adding clementine to the mix. I hope the story will take a darker turn b/c all smiles bone dady, flowers and sunshine is getting boring. I cant wait for the tsunare arc :)
10/6/2021 c6 max111000
Hi
Nice story, cute tails counter :P. I will read more and then say some more but its nice and engading. Have fun writing!
Hi
Nice story, cute tails counter :P. I will read more and then say some more but its nice and engading. Have fun writing!
6/2/2021 c33 Guest
you are the best overlord fanfiction writer pls don die
you are the best overlord fanfiction writer pls don die
3/15/2021 c1 Fizzle
This somewhat reminds me of LoveDeathRobot, the fox story... reborn as Kitsune, able to take it out on rapist nobles :D
give or take a few details ;)
This somewhat reminds me of LoveDeathRobot, the fox story... reborn as Kitsune, able to take it out on rapist nobles :D
give or take a few details ;)
1/16/2021 c6 AstrumBartimaeus
You mixed up the explanation of Yako and Zenko I feel, or the description in the last chapter is wrong.
Yako good alignment, (selfless), helpful,
Zenko mischievous, selfish, craving power
You mixed up the explanation of Yako and Zenko I feel, or the description in the last chapter is wrong.
Yako good alignment, (selfless), helpful,
Zenko mischievous, selfish, craving power
9/1/2020 c11 yeah
clemantine you moron you should have run...you fought a SPELLCASTER who bearhugged you to death...and now while weaker you gonna try and fight him...welp darwin award for you...again
clemantine you moron you should have run...you fought a SPELLCASTER who bearhugged you to death...and now while weaker you gonna try and fight him...welp darwin award for you...again
9/1/2020 c10 yeah
so let me get this straight...the girl is introduced as a freaking niece of adamentita class adventurer and their reaction is..." she looks HOT" ...well gentelman darwin award for you
so let me get this straight...the girl is introduced as a freaking niece of adamentita class adventurer and their reaction is..." she looks HOT" ...well gentelman darwin award for you