for The Royal Kitsune8/2/2017 c1 Kami
please keep going with this story dont let it die like many authors do D:
please keep going with this story dont let it die like many authors do D:
8/2/2017 c1 Joseph Orellana
please keep updating this story, would love to read more.
I just hope it doesn't die off like a lot of good fictions on here.
Keep up the good work!
please keep updating this story, would love to read more.
I just hope it doesn't die off like a lot of good fictions on here.
Keep up the good work!
4/20/2017 c1 Guest
Kill yourself.
Kill yourself.
12/12/2016 c1 frankieu
interesting first chapter looking forward to more and them having fun in the pokemon world
interesting first chapter looking forward to more and them having fun in the pokemon world
12/10/2016 c1 NatsuGooner
Whilst I did enjoy your first chapter I have 2 things that slightly bugged me. First is, Asuma being the only wind user in Konoha even though Naruto used it twice in the fight and second is their growth spurt wasn't much at all which makes me wonder just how small they were to begin with.
But that is just nit picking as they don't really impact the story.
Whilst I did enjoy your first chapter I have 2 things that slightly bugged me. First is, Asuma being the only wind user in Konoha even though Naruto used it twice in the fight and second is their growth spurt wasn't much at all which makes me wonder just how small they were to begin with.
But that is just nit picking as they don't really impact the story.
12/7/2016 c1 firelordeg
thank you for sharing this fantastic chapter as well as for all the time and effort put into this story please continue as soon as life allows
thank you for sharing this fantastic chapter as well as for all the time and effort put into this story please continue as soon as life allows
12/5/2016 c1 
46Hikari Nova
it's releasing not realizing lol, also Yokai not yoki is the energy of Japanese demons use, but an interesting fic though I think it's age 12 or 13 when naruto's age group graduated from the academy lol
46Hikari Novait's releasing not realizing lol, also Yokai not yoki is the energy of Japanese demons use, but an interesting fic though I think it's age 12 or 13 when naruto's age group graduated from the academy lol
12/1/2016 c1 Naruto009523
Well this is an interesting first chapter keep up the good work.
Well this is an interesting first chapter keep up the good work.
12/1/2016 c1 Guest
Yeah great story and the pairing is awesome
Yeah great story and the pairing is awesome
12/1/2016 c1 Guest
Damn great first halter I already want to read the 2nd one. Hopefully there is a second chapter you did a great job writing this story.
Damn great first halter I already want to read the 2nd one. Hopefully there is a second chapter you did a great job writing this story.