for When I Need You3/28/2017 c10 Jane Avelyne
Oh, oh, I found it! I found it! I found another fanfic to add to the list of my favourites. I'd never thought about the Doctor and Sarah Jane's relationship in this way, but I think you've made me change my mind about and actually find another pairing I ship... Hard. Lovely.
From what I gather, you take requests, so could you please write a chapter with the twelfth Doctor after he found Gallifrey?
Oh, oh, I found it! I found it! I found another fanfic to add to the list of my favourites. I'd never thought about the Doctor and Sarah Jane's relationship in this way, but I think you've made me change my mind about and actually find another pairing I ship... Hard. Lovely.
From what I gather, you take requests, so could you please write a chapter with the twelfth Doctor after he found Gallifrey?
3/26/2017 c10 
2Henri Jacks
Did you just create a table of contents in a fanfiction story? Well, that's a first. And the chapter is nice too, though still not the one I'm waiting for, is it? You PROMISED a long piece with Ten.
2Henri JacksDid you just create a table of contents in a fanfiction story? Well, that's a first. And the chapter is nice too, though still not the one I'm waiting for, is it? You PROMISED a long piece with Ten.
3/26/2017 c10 Adrianna Jones
Cheesy. Cheesy, disgustingly sweet and altogether very lovely. I loved every bit of this chapter, even though it followed a very simple path: the Doctor fucked up, went to Sarah to apologise, fucked up again, went to Sarah to apologise again, and finally got it right. (Yes, that is a summary of this chapter). Also, you seem to have created something of a table of contents at the beginning. Neat. I've never seen anything like it.
Cheesy. Cheesy, disgustingly sweet and altogether very lovely. I loved every bit of this chapter, even though it followed a very simple path: the Doctor fucked up, went to Sarah to apologise, fucked up again, went to Sarah to apologise again, and finally got it right. (Yes, that is a summary of this chapter). Also, you seem to have created something of a table of contents at the beginning. Neat. I've never seen anything like it.
2/19/2017 c6 Oliver Frost
Why can't this fanfic ever have a normal chapter when the characters simply confess love to each other? You know, the cheesy kind that everyone hates to love. Other than that, perfect.
Why can't this fanfic ever have a normal chapter when the characters simply confess love to each other? You know, the cheesy kind that everyone hates to love. Other than that, perfect.
2/14/2017 c6 Sarah Oswin Pond
Oh, this was simply beautiful! Although I'm woth Sarah Jane when it comes to the Titanic: I wouldn't be able to focus on the date if I knew everyone around me was going to die soon. (Then again, if I had the Doctor, I wouldn't be able to take my attention off him, so she's kind of excused xD)
Oh, this was simply beautiful! Although I'm woth Sarah Jane when it comes to the Titanic: I wouldn't be able to focus on the date if I knew everyone around me was going to die soon. (Then again, if I had the Doctor, I wouldn't be able to take my attention off him, so she's kind of excused xD)
2/14/2017 c6 Henri Jacks
Very sweet Valentine's Day specialIt IS some kind of insensitivity, but I think I'm with the Doctor on this onethe Titanic is definitely romantic. More so than sad.
And yes, I'm still waiting for the one with Ten.
Very sweet Valentine's Day specialIt IS some kind of insensitivity, but I think I'm with the Doctor on this onethe Titanic is definitely romantic. More so than sad.
And yes, I'm still waiting for the one with Ten.
1/26/2017 c5 Adrianna Jones
The ninth Doctor was never among my favourites, but I think that you've delivered his pain and hurt very well in this. It's exactly what I imagine his reaction to killing the Time Lords would be: rage, then crying, then apathy. Very nice :D
PS. Would it hurt to write some post-regeneration drama? ;)
The ninth Doctor was never among my favourites, but I think that you've delivered his pain and hurt very well in this. It's exactly what I imagine his reaction to killing the Time Lords would be: rage, then crying, then apathy. Very nice :D
PS. Would it hurt to write some post-regeneration drama? ;)
1/25/2017 c5 Sarah Oswin Pond
Very good chapter, great work on the emotions!
Was the book a reference to "UNIT: Fight for Humanity"? If it was, then I love it! If it wasn't, then... It had to be. Anyway, WHO UPDATES THE STORY AT ONE IN THE MORNING? (Which brings us to a yet better question: who checks fanfiction at one in the morning? XD)
Very nice. Waiting for the next one. Hopefully, Eleven again. He's always so on the spot!
Very good chapter, great work on the emotions!
Was the book a reference to "UNIT: Fight for Humanity"? If it was, then I love it! If it wasn't, then... It had to be. Anyway, WHO UPDATES THE STORY AT ONE IN THE MORNING? (Which brings us to a yet better question: who checks fanfiction at one in the morning? XD)
Very nice. Waiting for the next one. Hopefully, Eleven again. He's always so on the spot!
1/25/2017 c5 Henri Jacks
Whoa. An update in the morning? This is new. (At least, it's morning here. Not sure about you.) Anyway, YAY, NINE. He didn't get nearly enough screen time. This chapter was nice, though there were quite a few grammatical mistakes which just plain hurt my eyes. I really love the way you capture emotions, especially those of hurt and despair. A bit similar to the Doomsday chapter, but MORE. I also couldn't help but imagine Chris Eccleston acting this. It's very good!
Whoa. An update in the morning? This is new. (At least, it's morning here. Not sure about you.) Anyway, YAY, NINE. He didn't get nearly enough screen time. This chapter was nice, though there were quite a few grammatical mistakes which just plain hurt my eyes. I really love the way you capture emotions, especially those of hurt and despair. A bit similar to the Doomsday chapter, but MORE. I also couldn't help but imagine Chris Eccleston acting this. It's very good!
1/14/2017 c4 12ThatBigBlueBox
Aw, I love this story! Could you maybe write a chapter with Nine right after the War? I feel like Sarah would be really good support for him when he was in that state of mind.
12ThatBigBlueBoxAw, I love this story! Could you maybe write a chapter with Nine right after the War? I feel like Sarah would be really good support for him when he was in that state of mind.
1/12/2017 c4 tiger0237
First! This was... meh, not quite as good as I would expect from a collaboration, but still not so bad, either. And yes, thank you thank you thank you :) It's nice to know that your opinion matters. Five, huh? Honestly, I was expecting Three or Ten - they're the dancers, in my opinion. But this was nice. You both handled Sarah's feelings after being abandoned by the Doctor pretty well and that's nice.
Twelve? Not one of my favourite Doctors, but I'm interested how you'll fit SJ into his life. There are many gaps of his life we're missing in Season 8, so it's probably not that hard, though.
Good. Yes. Thanks for the update ;)
First! This was... meh, not quite as good as I would expect from a collaboration, but still not so bad, either. And yes, thank you thank you thank you :) It's nice to know that your opinion matters. Five, huh? Honestly, I was expecting Three or Ten - they're the dancers, in my opinion. But this was nice. You both handled Sarah's feelings after being abandoned by the Doctor pretty well and that's nice.
Twelve? Not one of my favourite Doctors, but I'm interested how you'll fit SJ into his life. There are many gaps of his life we're missing in Season 8, so it's probably not that hard, though.
Good. Yes. Thanks for the update ;)