for Soldier of Hope4/11 c7 Naruto Uchiha X
I denounce his prediction and cast a vote for sole Ikusaba x Naegi shipping TT_TT...shipping wars aside, I think you're doing a fantastic job on how Makoto's natural personality and how he connects with people is also tieing into him being a solider. Ngl, I'm kinda interested in seeing how you pull off Mukuro in that end, because with her mindset, it almost feels like she'd be bleak like Nagito, sans all the hope worship.
I denounce his prediction and cast a vote for sole Ikusaba x Naegi shipping TT_TT...shipping wars aside, I think you're doing a fantastic job on how Makoto's natural personality and how he connects with people is also tieing into him being a solider. Ngl, I'm kinda interested in seeing how you pull off Mukuro in that end, because with her mindset, it almost feels like she'd be bleak like Nagito, sans all the hope worship.
3/21 c7 
1outcast247
Happy to read this though I am curious if we will get a chapter with Togami or Celeste. Would love to see Naegi interact with them.
1outcast247Happy to read this though I am curious if we will get a chapter with Togami or Celeste. Would love to see Naegi interact with them.
3/21 c1 Juliasimon77
A masterwork of storytelling that pulses with raw intensity, weaving threads of fate, longing, and quiet revelation into an unforgettable tapestry. Every character breathes with a depth that defies the page flawed yet luminous, their struggles carving echoes of our own joys and sorrows. The prose is a symphony : elegant yet unforced, each word chosen with the precision of an artist shaping light and shadow. Scenes unfold with a cinematic grace moments of hushed vulnerability giving way to thunderous emotion, leaving an imprint that lingers long after the final passage. Neither confined by genre nor bound by convention, this is a story that transcends, a journey that doesn’t just unfold but unravels, drawing the reader into a world at once distant and deeply intimate. It is not merely read it is felt, an experience to be carried, pondered, and revisited like a beloved relic of time itself.
A masterwork of storytelling that pulses with raw intensity, weaving threads of fate, longing, and quiet revelation into an unforgettable tapestry. Every character breathes with a depth that defies the page flawed yet luminous, their struggles carving echoes of our own joys and sorrows. The prose is a symphony : elegant yet unforced, each word chosen with the precision of an artist shaping light and shadow. Scenes unfold with a cinematic grace moments of hushed vulnerability giving way to thunderous emotion, leaving an imprint that lingers long after the final passage. Neither confined by genre nor bound by convention, this is a story that transcends, a journey that doesn’t just unfold but unravels, drawing the reader into a world at once distant and deeply intimate. It is not merely read it is felt, an experience to be carried, pondered, and revisited like a beloved relic of time itself.
12/21/2024 c6 137TheRoseShadow21
Ooooh, another enjoyable chapter! Loved how confused Naegi was by Ishimaru's positivity, as well as the interactions he had with Maizono. The Enoshima scene was also intriguing. But anyway, I look forward to the next chapter :) :)
137TheRoseShadow21Ooooh, another enjoyable chapter! Loved how confused Naegi was by Ishimaru's positivity, as well as the interactions he had with Maizono. The Enoshima scene was also intriguing. But anyway, I look forward to the next chapter :) :)
12/20/2024 c6 6Vongola Ninja
Hey with you mentioning Genocider Jack/Jill do you think you could have it that when she shows up, She has a strange Love/Hate towards Makoto? Like she hates how he's actually able to stop her from doing what she wants but she loves the challenge and thrill of the fight or She finds his ordinary looking face and appearance boring but she goes drool crazy over his "I'll seriously kill you" look, fit body and kill count, Meanwhile Makoto is just confused by Jack/Jill.
Now as for the Free Time Events, I'd like to suggest that for those who have more then 5 Events they possibly get 2 bounding moments with Makoto just so their's no missing out on anything.
Now while I don't know if you'll still kill off some of the cast, As trying to give 15 character's equal focus can be difficult, I expect that any changes will be due to how different Makoto is from Canon, For instance the first motive I half expect Makoto to make the executive decision to destroy the other disk before the others see them in order to try and protect them, Obviously not everyone will agree with his decision (Kyoko, Byakuya, Mondo, Taka) from both an Investigatinal and Emotional point of view.
Speaking of Canon Girlfriend and Best Friend, I fully expect them to start putting together that Makoto is more than just being secretive about himself soon.
6Vongola NinjaHey with you mentioning Genocider Jack/Jill do you think you could have it that when she shows up, She has a strange Love/Hate towards Makoto? Like she hates how he's actually able to stop her from doing what she wants but she loves the challenge and thrill of the fight or She finds his ordinary looking face and appearance boring but she goes drool crazy over his "I'll seriously kill you" look, fit body and kill count, Meanwhile Makoto is just confused by Jack/Jill.
Now as for the Free Time Events, I'd like to suggest that for those who have more then 5 Events they possibly get 2 bounding moments with Makoto just so their's no missing out on anything.
Now while I don't know if you'll still kill off some of the cast, As trying to give 15 character's equal focus can be difficult, I expect that any changes will be due to how different Makoto is from Canon, For instance the first motive I half expect Makoto to make the executive decision to destroy the other disk before the others see them in order to try and protect them, Obviously not everyone will agree with his decision (Kyoko, Byakuya, Mondo, Taka) from both an Investigatinal and Emotional point of view.
Speaking of Canon Girlfriend and Best Friend, I fully expect them to start putting together that Makoto is more than just being secretive about himself soon.
9/17/2024 c5 codywhite162
I am loving the story so far and my vote for the pairing is a three way relationship between Makoto, Sayaka, and Mukuro.
I am loving the story so far and my vote for the pairing is a three way relationship between Makoto, Sayaka, and Mukuro.
7/21/2024 c4 137TheRoseShadow21
ooooh this was a very interesting chapter. It's interesting to see the things that happen the way the original storyline did and to see which bits are different/how they were tweaked. It's working well, and I'm enjoying reading it. Keep up the good work :)
137TheRoseShadow21ooooh this was a very interesting chapter. It's interesting to see the things that happen the way the original storyline did and to see which bits are different/how they were tweaked. It's working well, and I'm enjoying reading it. Keep up the good work :)
7/15/2024 c4 Guest
Hey are you gonna continue one your old stories like that Spider-Man and Loud house crossover Unite story ? Because I wanted to see more of that story.
Hey are you gonna continue one your old stories like that Spider-Man and Loud house crossover Unite story ? Because I wanted to see more of that story.
7/10/2024 c4 6Vongola Ninja
Well truthfully I would have preferred either Kyoko or Hina for a potential pairing, I get why its not them.(Actually I don't I just said that to sound understanding but I'll still respect the decision, Honestly speaking if you were to add cute or romantic moments in the free time events with the other Girl's I'd be happy, I'd be saying "This could happen in an alternate ending")
Hopefully you go the Threeway route, I mostly want it cause both Girl's deserve some happiness in their lives, Especially Mukuro seeing as she's had to relie on Luck and not skill to survive Junko, Who I hope we get to see in her own little panels.
Anyway I was sure Rule:7 was going to be about the Traitor (AKA Sakura if you keep that plot point) as a sort of way of constantly diving the others but it being a rule built around Makoto is also interesting, Also hope you let the other characters have different clothes to wear otherwise they'll get suspicious, Not to mention I'm guessing the reason they haven't mention Rule:7 is because Makoto the only one who knows about it.
6Vongola NinjaWell truthfully I would have preferred either Kyoko or Hina for a potential pairing, I get why its not them.(Actually I don't I just said that to sound understanding but I'll still respect the decision, Honestly speaking if you were to add cute or romantic moments in the free time events with the other Girl's I'd be happy, I'd be saying "This could happen in an alternate ending")
Hopefully you go the Threeway route, I mostly want it cause both Girl's deserve some happiness in their lives, Especially Mukuro seeing as she's had to relie on Luck and not skill to survive Junko, Who I hope we get to see in her own little panels.
Anyway I was sure Rule:7 was going to be about the Traitor (AKA Sakura if you keep that plot point) as a sort of way of constantly diving the others but it being a rule built around Makoto is also interesting, Also hope you let the other characters have different clothes to wear otherwise they'll get suspicious, Not to mention I'm guessing the reason they haven't mention Rule:7 is because Makoto the only one who knows about it.
7/10/2024 c4 WHOstEist
Would’ve, kinda, have liked to know the specific firearms (and maybe even the cartridges) he’d been given, but eh, guess it’s not that important.
Would’ve, kinda, have liked to know the specific firearms (and maybe even the cartridges) he’d been given, but eh, guess it’s not that important.
7/9/2024 c4 yogaratw607
IM actually fine you pairing naegi x maizono or naegi x ikusaba or both of them have naegi
Those 2 really close naegi i mean naegi make mukuro being human while Sayaka he more close to her since middle school
IM actually fine you pairing naegi x maizono or naegi x ikusaba or both of them have naegi
Those 2 really close naegi i mean naegi make mukuro being human while Sayaka he more close to her since middle school