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8Arch-Angel-Writer
Wow this chapter was…just wow. Ok so first we see the new from both galaxies. I love you put so many of my responses in the story. Thank you I am so honored. Now we see the politics.
I always wondered why Voe Attell held such hate for the Republic. Now you’ve given an explanation. Though you are right that there is progress…somewhat. Thrawn helping Syndulla with the negotiations is a good angle.
There is a phrase I think Thrawn should tell Syndulla. “If you want peace, prepare for war. Si vis pacem, para bellum.” The phrase presents the insight that the conditions of peace are often preserved by a readiness to make war to defend said peace when the need arises
YAY RIYO IS PREGNANT! The first one. I hope Padme is next! Then we have Dani, Aayla, Deliah, Bo-Katan, and Celeste. The likes of Luminara, Barriss, Ahsoka, Ros Lai, and the others I feel are to soon. Ahsoka and Barriss are still teens…unless your gonna have teen pregnancies. I imagen since you’re a Jersey boy, Riyo’s cravings will include a Taylor Ham, egg, and cheese sandwich with…..caramel sauce for dipping or a Chocolate Covered Eggplant and Brisket Sandwich (got that for my cousin once). Honestly that the only pregnancy craving I can think of. I’m not gonna suggest Pickles with Ice Cream.
I’m honestly surprise Pietro didn’t superspeed grab everybody to gather them and shout “IM GONNA BE A FATHER!” Also really love the father-daughter/son relationship Clint has with the twins.
Question, why are the lawyers called avacados? Is that some food joke.
Politics are also stressful and headache inducing.
You made Nelson give several good points. Classic Jameson would argue that masked menaces have no family and should have their identities revealed no matter what but using Pepper as an example of villains going after a heroes loved ones is good.
Celeste pointing out the accords are like how the Senate holds the Jedi Order on a leash is spot on. In the Old Republic, the Jedi could go to whatever planet and help whoever they want but the current Jedi Order NEEDS permission and is often sent by senators to do this and that.
I didn’t know about the Kyoto Protocol or the Treaty of Versailles and I just read them. I can’t imagen the hours you needed to do in reviews politics and events from the past to create this chapter.
One thing those, when Matt stated "What you intend on doing, if possibly going forward with this with what we have read, you'd have most of, if not the entire team be prosecuted without a trial and imprisoned all because they want to help out their fellow man without the approval of an unelected United Nations Panel. In normal cases, entering foreign countries without any legal authority is understandable. However, without due and proper process, it's violating civil rights the world over. And that's just for a start.” I’m surprised you didn’t have Matt say. “How long before you start setting up Camps all over the world to house enhanced individuals who would most likely be denied their basic human rights?”
My favorite couple is Steve and Aayla which is personal because I love Aayla and Captain America is my Favorite hero. Pure and simple.
My favorite villain is Taskmaster because he is a diamond in the rough, He can literally learn any style on Earth or in the Galaxy. His skills make him a major threat which can grow if he were to say be hired by the Sith. I can imagen Taskmaster sparing with Malgus.
8Arch-Angel-WriterWow this chapter was…just wow. Ok so first we see the new from both galaxies. I love you put so many of my responses in the story. Thank you I am so honored. Now we see the politics.
I always wondered why Voe Attell held such hate for the Republic. Now you’ve given an explanation. Though you are right that there is progress…somewhat. Thrawn helping Syndulla with the negotiations is a good angle.
There is a phrase I think Thrawn should tell Syndulla. “If you want peace, prepare for war. Si vis pacem, para bellum.” The phrase presents the insight that the conditions of peace are often preserved by a readiness to make war to defend said peace when the need arises
YAY RIYO IS PREGNANT! The first one. I hope Padme is next! Then we have Dani, Aayla, Deliah, Bo-Katan, and Celeste. The likes of Luminara, Barriss, Ahsoka, Ros Lai, and the others I feel are to soon. Ahsoka and Barriss are still teens…unless your gonna have teen pregnancies. I imagen since you’re a Jersey boy, Riyo’s cravings will include a Taylor Ham, egg, and cheese sandwich with…..caramel sauce for dipping or a Chocolate Covered Eggplant and Brisket Sandwich (got that for my cousin once). Honestly that the only pregnancy craving I can think of. I’m not gonna suggest Pickles with Ice Cream.
I’m honestly surprise Pietro didn’t superspeed grab everybody to gather them and shout “IM GONNA BE A FATHER!” Also really love the father-daughter/son relationship Clint has with the twins.
Question, why are the lawyers called avacados? Is that some food joke.
Politics are also stressful and headache inducing.
You made Nelson give several good points. Classic Jameson would argue that masked menaces have no family and should have their identities revealed no matter what but using Pepper as an example of villains going after a heroes loved ones is good.
Celeste pointing out the accords are like how the Senate holds the Jedi Order on a leash is spot on. In the Old Republic, the Jedi could go to whatever planet and help whoever they want but the current Jedi Order NEEDS permission and is often sent by senators to do this and that.
I didn’t know about the Kyoto Protocol or the Treaty of Versailles and I just read them. I can’t imagen the hours you needed to do in reviews politics and events from the past to create this chapter.
One thing those, when Matt stated "What you intend on doing, if possibly going forward with this with what we have read, you'd have most of, if not the entire team be prosecuted without a trial and imprisoned all because they want to help out their fellow man without the approval of an unelected United Nations Panel. In normal cases, entering foreign countries without any legal authority is understandable. However, without due and proper process, it's violating civil rights the world over. And that's just for a start.” I’m surprised you didn’t have Matt say. “How long before you start setting up Camps all over the world to house enhanced individuals who would most likely be denied their basic human rights?”
My favorite couple is Steve and Aayla which is personal because I love Aayla and Captain America is my Favorite hero. Pure and simple.
My favorite villain is Taskmaster because he is a diamond in the rough, He can literally learn any style on Earth or in the Galaxy. His skills make him a major threat which can grow if he were to say be hired by the Sith. I can imagen Taskmaster sparing with Malgus.
11h c133 EricaWilliam0
I just finished reading your latest story honestly, it was a really engaging read! I loved how the characters felt so alive and the flow of the plot kept me hooked. You’ve got a great way with storytelling.
I’m a digital artist and I work on 2D/3D character designs and comic adaptations. I think your story would look amazing in visual form.
If you’re open to it, please check your PM I’d love the chance to collaborate with you!
I just finished reading your latest story honestly, it was a really engaging read! I loved how the characters felt so alive and the flow of the plot kept me hooked. You’ve got a great way with storytelling.
I’m a digital artist and I work on 2D/3D character designs and comic adaptations. I think your story would look amazing in visual form.
If you’re open to it, please check your PM I’d love the chance to collaborate with you!
12h c133 1Ultimatrix bearer
Oh that was beautiful. After she hulk confirmed the accords were apealed I've been waiting for an in depth breakdown as to WHY and this was perfect.
My only issue is the avengers spreading themselves too thin is a valid argument given even with FTL technology space is huge with both series establishing that news and aid take time as a result .
KEEP BEING AWESOME!
1Ultimatrix bearerOh that was beautiful. After she hulk confirmed the accords were apealed I've been waiting for an in depth breakdown as to WHY and this was perfect.
My only issue is the avengers spreading themselves too thin is a valid argument given even with FTL technology space is huge with both series establishing that news and aid take time as a result .
KEEP BEING AWESOME!
13h c133 cmacenka
Ngl, I was anticipating Palpy would get into the World Between Worlds and either get smacked down by Knull (who’s my guess as to what’s stuck in there) or acquires the Necrosword.
Ngl, I was anticipating Palpy would get into the World Between Worlds and either get smacked down by Knull (who’s my guess as to what’s stuck in there) or acquires the Necrosword.
15h c133 Primalbot22
Another chapter finished, but it goes to show why everyone hates politics! I was shocked to see Chuchi pregnant and Pietro becoming a father one day. Hopefully you can spread the news to the Avengers when the time is right. As for the dark sith stasis pod, which sith is in that pod? I have a few names but, I’m thinking it’s Darth Talon. If not, oh well. But, it would be interesting to see the reveal in the future. I hope you will add Revan returning to the Jedi later on.
Another chapter finished, but it goes to show why everyone hates politics! I was shocked to see Chuchi pregnant and Pietro becoming a father one day. Hopefully you can spread the news to the Avengers when the time is right. As for the dark sith stasis pod, which sith is in that pod? I have a few names but, I’m thinking it’s Darth Talon. If not, oh well. But, it would be interesting to see the reveal in the future. I hope you will add Revan returning to the Jedi later on.
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To build on my last statement since i know where youll argue saying its part of buckys arc.. you blew up his arc with celeste and the anicent one.. you should have stayed the course. Now you just look like you want to eat the cake after having it too. Cant be both ways.. you either stick to your au branch off of celeste and bucky redemption and rehabbing or have bucky and zemo and stark but both? Is just ridiculous and sloppy to an observant reader.
To build on my last statement since i know where youll argue saying its part of buckys arc.. you blew up his arc with celeste and the anicent one.. you should have stayed the course. Now you just look like you want to eat the cake after having it too. Cant be both ways.. you either stick to your au branch off of celeste and bucky redemption and rehabbing or have bucky and zemo and stark but both? Is just ridiculous and sloppy to an observant reader.
16h c53 llimiter4
Sooo youve ignored fixing buckys head, which btw was the whole point to go to napel for him aside from supporting celeste.. but gave celeste the quick fix, made the tailsmen easily accessible to anyone? and what? Made the ancient one look incompetent or compliant, bucky usable and kal a different animal?
Weak. Enrich your plot better than just with unrealistic character convience. This is just lazy.
Sooo youve ignored fixing buckys head, which btw was the whole point to go to napel for him aside from supporting celeste.. but gave celeste the quick fix, made the tailsmen easily accessible to anyone? and what? Made the ancient one look incompetent or compliant, bucky usable and kal a different animal?
Weak. Enrich your plot better than just with unrealistic character convience. This is just lazy.
17h c133 GameMax10
Good chapter, the UN being useless it's so faithful to real life Canon that it hurts, on another note, FUCK Iron Heart, geez, still pisses me off that we got NOTHING about Ghost Rider nor Nova in the MCU, but the Character that no one wanted in the comics it's getting a full tv show, fuck you Disney.
I don't get their fetish to give D-Tier characters Shows and Movies. Also they couldn't find someone more wimp looking to play The Hood role? That's the less intimidating dude that i've ever seen, looks like those stereotypical dorks/nerds that play DnD in their Grandma basement on Cartoons.
Jesus, sorry for the Rant, but after i watched Thunderbolts, film that spark the little fire of hope that vanished since Endgame, it just frustrating that we go back to the shitty slop. I want Secret Wars to be the Flaspoint of the MCU, so they can Reboot and star anew. Anyway, waiting to se what's next, hope Pietro and Chuchi have twins, but female to contrast Wiccan and Speed.
Good chapter, the UN being useless it's so faithful to real life Canon that it hurts, on another note, FUCK Iron Heart, geez, still pisses me off that we got NOTHING about Ghost Rider nor Nova in the MCU, but the Character that no one wanted in the comics it's getting a full tv show, fuck you Disney.
I don't get their fetish to give D-Tier characters Shows and Movies. Also they couldn't find someone more wimp looking to play The Hood role? That's the less intimidating dude that i've ever seen, looks like those stereotypical dorks/nerds that play DnD in their Grandma basement on Cartoons.
Jesus, sorry for the Rant, but after i watched Thunderbolts, film that spark the little fire of hope that vanished since Endgame, it just frustrating that we go back to the shitty slop. I want Secret Wars to be the Flaspoint of the MCU, so they can Reboot and star anew. Anyway, waiting to se what's next, hope Pietro and Chuchi have twins, but female to contrast Wiccan and Speed.
19h c133 7The A-Demonbane
Really if you stop to think about it Palpatine's plan is hanging by a thread, Palpatine's role in the story was inspired by many tyrants in history and hell Adolf Hitler's own rise to power mirrors his in quite a few ways, almost beat for beat. If senators like Padme, Organa and Mothma got their hands on a history book from Earth and read that particular rise to power, the Rebel Alliance would be born much, MUCH earlier due to the sheer level of alarms that would bring. Of course they'd try to appeal through the Senate but sadly Palpatine won by the time he got emergency powers, there's a reason the constitution doesn't let democratically elected get those sorts of powers.
Hell it doesn't even have to be political for it to show that this is suspicious as hell. Logistically speaking running an army of this size is a nightmare, but they seemed to be ready from day one, how? Logistically speaking Windu, Obi Wan, Anakin, Padme and the Jedi should be dead, but the Clone Army was ready to march in mass-produced Star Destroyers, with weapons and vehicles all of which would have taken FAR more time than merely 10 years to get to that number. But no everything was set to go as soon as it was needed...
Really good story! Can't wait for the reveal of Palpatine's new apprentice!
7The A-DemonbaneReally if you stop to think about it Palpatine's plan is hanging by a thread, Palpatine's role in the story was inspired by many tyrants in history and hell Adolf Hitler's own rise to power mirrors his in quite a few ways, almost beat for beat. If senators like Padme, Organa and Mothma got their hands on a history book from Earth and read that particular rise to power, the Rebel Alliance would be born much, MUCH earlier due to the sheer level of alarms that would bring. Of course they'd try to appeal through the Senate but sadly Palpatine won by the time he got emergency powers, there's a reason the constitution doesn't let democratically elected get those sorts of powers.
Hell it doesn't even have to be political for it to show that this is suspicious as hell. Logistically speaking running an army of this size is a nightmare, but they seemed to be ready from day one, how? Logistically speaking Windu, Obi Wan, Anakin, Padme and the Jedi should be dead, but the Clone Army was ready to march in mass-produced Star Destroyers, with weapons and vehicles all of which would have taken FAR more time than merely 10 years to get to that number. But no everything was set to go as soon as it was needed...
Really good story! Can't wait for the reveal of Palpatine's new apprentice!
19h c133 Guest
Hopefully the Avengers will get the UN off their backs without problems.
Hopefully the Avengers will get the UN off their backs without problems.
20h c133 Bucio
Well, we've seen news from both sides of the Galaxy (Galaxies), now we see politics, first looking at the disputes between the Separatists, the Republic, and the Mandalorians. It's interesting to see that it's Thrawn who gives Cham the answer on how to deal with this circus: through caution and fear of the next big threat (which is true, if we consider Maul on one side and The Son on the other).
On the other hand, on Earth, we go to the Avengers and the moment of dealing with the UN and the details of the Sokovia Accords. While at first he was nervous about being there, in the end Foggy is the MVP of that part, as he discovers exactly the idea behind said agreements. Which gives our heroes ample room to negotiate a better deal (the good thing about this part, and not Civil War, thanks to there being a consensus and not leaving that decision to Tony).
From the end, Sidius finding, through Sith Magic, someone locked inside a temple, who could be useful to him (given that Dooku and Anakin are already lost causes for him) sounds too convenient, almost too easy. But considering that The Son is a manifestation of the Dark Side and with the large number of legendary Sith on his side, it wouldn't be strange to consider the possibility that the vision is a trap for Palpatine.
On the good side, Riyo giving Pietro the good news that they're going to be parents; and he reacted happily, as did Clint and Wanda, who were with them (I hope to see the avalanche of congratulations and well wishes when the rest of the gang finds out). In addition to literally watching Thrawn almost complain about being forced to become friends with the Avengers, and more slowly being "corrupted" by Wanda, as we watched him start using expressions, phrases, and words from Earth.
Good luck and keep it up.
Well, we've seen news from both sides of the Galaxy (Galaxies), now we see politics, first looking at the disputes between the Separatists, the Republic, and the Mandalorians. It's interesting to see that it's Thrawn who gives Cham the answer on how to deal with this circus: through caution and fear of the next big threat (which is true, if we consider Maul on one side and The Son on the other).
On the other hand, on Earth, we go to the Avengers and the moment of dealing with the UN and the details of the Sokovia Accords. While at first he was nervous about being there, in the end Foggy is the MVP of that part, as he discovers exactly the idea behind said agreements. Which gives our heroes ample room to negotiate a better deal (the good thing about this part, and not Civil War, thanks to there being a consensus and not leaving that decision to Tony).
From the end, Sidius finding, through Sith Magic, someone locked inside a temple, who could be useful to him (given that Dooku and Anakin are already lost causes for him) sounds too convenient, almost too easy. But considering that The Son is a manifestation of the Dark Side and with the large number of legendary Sith on his side, it wouldn't be strange to consider the possibility that the vision is a trap for Palpatine.
On the good side, Riyo giving Pietro the good news that they're going to be parents; and he reacted happily, as did Clint and Wanda, who were with them (I hope to see the avalanche of congratulations and well wishes when the rest of the gang finds out). In addition to literally watching Thrawn almost complain about being forced to become friends with the Avengers, and more slowly being "corrupted" by Wanda, as we watched him start using expressions, phrases, and words from Earth.
Good luck and keep it up.