5/6/2017 c1 12Vampireninja101
Man, it's been a year since I last updated any of my stories, and years since the last time I read a fanfic! I feel ooold! XD Anyway, fantastic job! Such an improvement! I can't wait to relive this story!
Man, it's been a year since I last updated any of my stories, and years since the last time I read a fanfic! I feel ooold! XD Anyway, fantastic job! Such an improvement! I can't wait to relive this story!
12/6/2016 c1 14Gracidea of the Valley
Strong start. Definately more improved than the original, I feel. Good luck continuing forward
Strong start. Definately more improved than the original, I feel. Good luck continuing forward