5/17/2018 c1 14cloudyailin
Nice alternate storyline! Straightforward, just the right amount of intrigue, and the ending has that delicious balance between cliffhanger and resolve where the reader has an idea of how things will play out so it doesn't quite leave the reader hanging, but does make them want more. Great idea!
Nice alternate storyline! Straightforward, just the right amount of intrigue, and the ending has that delicious balance between cliffhanger and resolve where the reader has an idea of how things will play out so it doesn't quite leave the reader hanging, but does make them want more. Great idea!