for The Side of Me Only You Can See7/10/2017 c8 Pokewatch
Okay, OKAY, I DIDN'T NEED MY HEART, THAT WAS SO. DAMN. AWESOME!
Okay, OKAY, I DIDN'T NEED MY HEART, THAT WAS SO. DAMN. AWESOME!
4/15/2017 c8 Anonymous
Dude I was there at tha stream me and my friends called out Brad because he was there and she ended the stream like immediately after it was tha funniest thing
Dude I was there at tha stream me and my friends called out Brad because he was there and she ended the stream like immediately after it was tha funniest thing
2/25/2017 c8 Artonis97
Too Bad they actually broke up (I know it's not super official). Don't wanna trigger y'all but i hated that shen and brad were dating, because she made him someone else besides he really was. I like Shen btw and watch her videos from time to time (but I really hate her laugh, srsly it gives me cancer). So really nicely written FF, but besides everyone else crying when Shen said Brad started avoiding her, I was actually celebrating and was "proud "of Brad. Like I said I like Shen and I'm not judging her in any way (other than her laugh xD) and I hope she gets better, but I'm really happy to watch Brad being just how he is Pure Memes and no Soul xD (I hope you understand my point and don't be triggered) ;)
Too Bad they actually broke up (I know it's not super official). Don't wanna trigger y'all but i hated that shen and brad were dating, because she made him someone else besides he really was. I like Shen btw and watch her videos from time to time (but I really hate her laugh, srsly it gives me cancer). So really nicely written FF, but besides everyone else crying when Shen said Brad started avoiding her, I was actually celebrating and was "proud "of Brad. Like I said I like Shen and I'm not judging her in any way (other than her laugh xD) and I hope she gets better, but I'm really happy to watch Brad being just how he is Pure Memes and no Soul xD (I hope you understand my point and don't be triggered) ;)
2/24/2017 c8 Guest
Hello, I love your story, it almost made me cry at the end of this chapter. I was wondering if you could possibly maybe in the future write a story about zylbrad and co (couldnt be bothered to write all there names) go into the overwatch universe? Im asking you and not anybody else because... well as ive read in your stories you'd be more then capible of writing a fanfic like that with it still making sense
You dont have to, but please just think about it.
Wishing you the best
Louisa
Hello, I love your story, it almost made me cry at the end of this chapter. I was wondering if you could possibly maybe in the future write a story about zylbrad and co (couldnt be bothered to write all there names) go into the overwatch universe? Im asking you and not anybody else because... well as ive read in your stories you'd be more then capible of writing a fanfic like that with it still making sense
You dont have to, but please just think about it.
Wishing you the best
Louisa
2/14/2017 c8 GinnyKitty
Oh My God...You have impressed me so badly! It was a dream all this time?! But it feels so real! You really did a job well done! I respect your writing so much! All the moments that leads up to this. I wasn't prepared for this emotional state! TT
Did you know that I open almost everyday to check when Chapter 8 is coming up? and I'm so glad I got to read this on Valentine's day! I absolutely adore this fic. I really do.
We all know what happens at the ending, right ;)
Oh My God...You have impressed me so badly! It was a dream all this time?! But it feels so real! You really did a job well done! I respect your writing so much! All the moments that leads up to this. I wasn't prepared for this emotional state! TT
Did you know that I open almost everyday to check when Chapter 8 is coming up? and I'm so glad I got to read this on Valentine's day! I absolutely adore this fic. I really do.
We all know what happens at the ending, right ;)
2/14/2017 c8 378PrussiaMan
Seems like I'm high today (I shouldn't write my Reviews on a Phone)
I love how Neptune gives "hints" about how she likes Bazz
"Bazz chuckled before raising his hand to stroke Neptune's hair" Shouldn't Neptune be stroking something xD
"Elliott smiled as he nodded before heading to the door with Oasis on his tail" ( ͡ ͜ʖ ͡) (maybe it's just funny for me because Tail (Schwanz) is the german "Slang" for D!ck)
Oh my Sty finally a BazzTune Kiss **
"I'm in love, and will forever be in love with you until whatever supernatural force out there knows when it'll end" So the mighty ZylPai-God Stylosa knows :D
Oh yea Boiiiii a Zylpai-Kiss and with that 2 Kisses in one Chapter wow nice work
Pulling that f#ckin' dream sh!t at me? I mean it is a good concept but everything developed here, every ship evolved and for what? Nothing I mean okay much crap happened but I'm a little sad ;(
Wow that is a good connection to Real Life I Love it :D
Okay with that my normal Review is finished (with 3 parts _) now I'll talk a bit about everything
If I'm not mistaking I follow you since the 3rd Chapter and it was an amazing Time I'm really thankful for you finishing this really nice Fanfic
And thank you for mentioning me again that really means a lot to me but I'm not the man you are the man because think about it you wrote the Chapters I was writting the Reciews too so without you I couldn't write my Reviews
And finally something to this Chapter... it's was written perfect like every single Chapter of this Fanfic you have written, it really got me and this Dream thing really got me thinking but it surprised me how good you connected the end of the Story to the real world
I didn't cry but it really hit me in the feelings I must say and I think that it is a good Idea that you didn't made an real 'Happy-Ending'
Now I just want to thank you for the amazing Times I had writing my Reviews and reading your Chapters maybe we'll read each other in another Fanfiction of yours (if I'm in the fandom of it)
So thank you for the awesome Time
Sincerely, 378PrussiaMan
Seems like I'm high today (I shouldn't write my Reviews on a Phone)
I love how Neptune gives "hints" about how she likes Bazz
"Bazz chuckled before raising his hand to stroke Neptune's hair" Shouldn't Neptune be stroking something xD
"Elliott smiled as he nodded before heading to the door with Oasis on his tail" ( ͡ ͜ʖ ͡) (maybe it's just funny for me because Tail (Schwanz) is the german "Slang" for D!ck)
Oh my Sty finally a BazzTune Kiss **
"I'm in love, and will forever be in love with you until whatever supernatural force out there knows when it'll end" So the mighty ZylPai-God Stylosa knows :D
Oh yea Boiiiii a Zylpai-Kiss and with that 2 Kisses in one Chapter wow nice work
Pulling that f#ckin' dream sh!t at me? I mean it is a good concept but everything developed here, every ship evolved and for what? Nothing I mean okay much crap happened but I'm a little sad ;(
Wow that is a good connection to Real Life I Love it :D
Okay with that my normal Review is finished (with 3 parts _) now I'll talk a bit about everything
If I'm not mistaking I follow you since the 3rd Chapter and it was an amazing Time I'm really thankful for you finishing this really nice Fanfic
And thank you for mentioning me again that really means a lot to me but I'm not the man you are the man because think about it you wrote the Chapters I was writting the Reciews too so without you I couldn't write my Reviews
And finally something to this Chapter... it's was written perfect like every single Chapter of this Fanfic you have written, it really got me and this Dream thing really got me thinking but it surprised me how good you connected the end of the Story to the real world
I didn't cry but it really hit me in the feelings I must say and I think that it is a good Idea that you didn't made an real 'Happy-Ending'
Now I just want to thank you for the amazing Times I had writing my Reviews and reading your Chapters maybe we'll read each other in another Fanfiction of yours (if I'm in the fandom of it)
So thank you for the awesome Time
Sincerely, 378PrussiaMan
2/14/2017 c8 Guest
F#ck me I came on posting again argh! _
Seems a little cliche with the lighting striking into that goddamn Tree but it really works
Brad you Bastard you don't have to fix anything always think about the Ending, isn't that Right Animelover54321?!
If Brad screws the whole Island Shen is on the list too ( ͡ ͜ʖ ͡)
Oh a nice Fight between Bros the only real thing to do when there is a controversy, really nice written I must say, like the rest of the Story of course!
Nah Oasis you are so cute, Bazz and Brad just were beating the sh!t out of each other nothing strengthens a Bros-ship more than that
Okay Sean they may be though nuts but trust me if I punch them in the nuts they won't be that though anymore xD (man, I know how much that hurts)
"She didn't mind how wet he was at the moment" well shouldn't be Oasis wet ( ͡ ͜ʖ ͡)
Neptune, Neptune, Neptune Bazz and Brad can keep each other warm ( ͡ ͜ʖ ͡)
Yes Sean Shen needs to be alone and think about a certain Dream, right Animelover54321?! (I also thought Shen would go and search them)
F#ck me I came on posting again argh! _
Seems a little cliche with the lighting striking into that goddamn Tree but it really works
Brad you Bastard you don't have to fix anything always think about the Ending, isn't that Right Animelover54321?!
If Brad screws the whole Island Shen is on the list too ( ͡ ͜ʖ ͡)
Oh a nice Fight between Bros the only real thing to do when there is a controversy, really nice written I must say, like the rest of the Story of course!
Nah Oasis you are so cute, Bazz and Brad just were beating the sh!t out of each other nothing strengthens a Bros-ship more than that
Okay Sean they may be though nuts but trust me if I punch them in the nuts they won't be that though anymore xD (man, I know how much that hurts)
"She didn't mind how wet he was at the moment" well shouldn't be Oasis wet ( ͡ ͜ʖ ͡)
Neptune, Neptune, Neptune Bazz and Brad can keep each other warm ( ͡ ͜ʖ ͡)
Yes Sean Shen needs to be alone and think about a certain Dream, right Animelover54321?! (I also thought Shen would go and search them)
2/14/2017 c8 378PrussiaMan
Heya you f#ckin' C#nt! :D
(And again for this Review I'll use my Review-Style so deal with it!)
Why the hell does "tracking Brad down" sound like they would try to rape the crap outta them?! xD
Oh yes Brad must be under great pressure good thing that he has Shen ( ͡ ͜ʖ ͡)
For me it's no wonder that Bazz finds Brad I mean if you google 'Bazza Gazza Face' the first picture is a policeman
Hey Brad you F#ck-Head quit being such an wannabe Emo-C#nt and go back to the cabins
"with the all too familiar slaps of wet leaves smacking against their cold, wet bodies" are you sure that you don't want to write lemon/smut Fanfics because that sounds like a Beginning for a Jungle-Yaoi xD (but it should have been cold, wet and naked bodies)
Heya you f#ckin' C#nt! :D
(And again for this Review I'll use my Review-Style so deal with it!)
Why the hell does "tracking Brad down" sound like they would try to rape the crap outta them?! xD
Oh yes Brad must be under great pressure good thing that he has Shen ( ͡ ͜ʖ ͡)
For me it's no wonder that Bazz finds Brad I mean if you google 'Bazza Gazza Face' the first picture is a policeman
Hey Brad you F#ck-Head quit being such an wannabe Emo-C#nt and go back to the cabins
"with the all too familiar slaps of wet leaves smacking against their cold, wet bodies" are you sure that you don't want to write lemon/smut Fanfics because that sounds like a Beginning for a Jungle-Yaoi xD (but it should have been cold, wet and naked bodies)
2/13/2017 c8 Guest
Holllllyyyyy shittttttt
Holllllyyyyy shittttttt
2/13/2017 c8 
1FalloutWeeb
That ending? Complete surprise. It had me in shock, disbelieve and now I feel kinda empty because its ended. But nows not the time, so, to start I really like how you tied it in to real life, I also like how you used the weather and really got a bad vibe going, it mad me panic for fictional zylpai. However overall I loved it, and I hope whatever plans you have for the future are as successful as this one.
1FalloutWeebThat ending? Complete surprise. It had me in shock, disbelieve and now I feel kinda empty because its ended. But nows not the time, so, to start I really like how you tied it in to real life, I also like how you used the weather and really got a bad vibe going, it mad me panic for fictional zylpai. However overall I loved it, and I hope whatever plans you have for the future are as successful as this one.
2/13/2017 c1 Gicg
That was amazing. I didn't expect that ending.
That was amazing. I didn't expect that ending.
2/13/2017 c8 YourUnAverageDude
This is so sad...*cries* I loved it from the start, to the end, but this surprised me!
This is so sad...*cries* I loved it from the start, to the end, but this surprised me!
2/13/2017 c8 3LunaRose2468
OMG, this chapter was so sad! I didn't cry in reality, because apparently I have no soul, but my heart burst into tears.
I actually very recently made an account on FanFiction, but I've been reading your story since the first three chapters! I really loved it (otherwise why would I be typing this?). You put a lot of effort into each and every chapter, and I'm saddened to see it end, like with all good stories. Even though there were a FEW little mistakes with grammer (I can honestly be such a grammer Nazi, along with being a punctuation Nazi, and other-things-that-have-to-do-with-those-two Nazi) but I didn't really mind it when there was such a good story to be read! I honestly couldn't find anything bad in your story, so kudos to you! .
I can't wait to see what else you plan on writing, because I think your going to be going many places!
And, also, #Zylpai!
(:-)
3LunaRose2468OMG, this chapter was so sad! I didn't cry in reality, because apparently I have no soul, but my heart burst into tears.
I actually very recently made an account on FanFiction, but I've been reading your story since the first three chapters! I really loved it (otherwise why would I be typing this?). You put a lot of effort into each and every chapter, and I'm saddened to see it end, like with all good stories. Even though there were a FEW little mistakes with grammer (I can honestly be such a grammer Nazi, along with being a punctuation Nazi, and other-things-that-have-to-do-with-those-two Nazi) but I didn't really mind it when there was such a good story to be read! I honestly couldn't find anything bad in your story, so kudos to you! .
I can't wait to see what else you plan on writing, because I think your going to be going many places!
And, also, #Zylpai!
(:-)