
4/5 c7 themiddleofthepip
This fic is so so SO good! i was looking for a fic where obito (unwillingly sorta) comes back to Konoha within his early years as 'madara' and while this fic isnt exactly what i was looking for its GUT-WRENCHING! (very good thing!)! the writing is so captivating and how you explore obitos reactions and feelings of everyone (after being THROUGH IT) is so heartbreaking! i especially love the kushina obito moment because im a sucker for their sortamother/sortason relationship. Im really interested in what happens next, but this hasn't updated in years. while you probably dont have any interest in this story anymore i just want to thank you for writing this, i hope youre still doing good and i wish you goodluck and no rainstorms breaking chicken coups. 3
This fic is so so SO good! i was looking for a fic where obito (unwillingly sorta) comes back to Konoha within his early years as 'madara' and while this fic isnt exactly what i was looking for its GUT-WRENCHING! (very good thing!)! the writing is so captivating and how you explore obitos reactions and feelings of everyone (after being THROUGH IT) is so heartbreaking! i especially love the kushina obito moment because im a sucker for their sortamother/sortason relationship. Im really interested in what happens next, but this hasn't updated in years. while you probably dont have any interest in this story anymore i just want to thank you for writing this, i hope youre still doing good and i wish you goodluck and no rainstorms breaking chicken coups. 3
9/12/2024 c7 Lobster
And she did die.
LOL
Good story tho.
And she did die.
LOL
Good story tho.
6/7/2024 c5 riceyworld123
Doesn’t obito have harsirama(don’t know if that’s the correct way to spell it) cells, so he technically doesn’t need to eat or drink
Doesn’t obito have harsirama(don’t know if that’s the correct way to spell it) cells, so he technically doesn’t need to eat or drink
5/2/2023 c7 Ikahorse
I really like this story of yours and I hope you decided to continue update this in the future please.
I really like this story of yours and I hope you decided to continue update this in the future please.
6/30/2018 c7 FrostyFeet
I haven’t read angsty stuff in a while but I’m glad I found your story. Looking forward to see how obito behaves without Madara’s control. Anyway, good stuff!
I haven’t read angsty stuff in a while but I’m glad I found your story. Looking forward to see how obito behaves without Madara’s control. Anyway, good stuff!
5/22/2018 c5 Guest
oh minato is going to get a beatdown from kushina now.
oh minato is going to get a beatdown from kushina now.
5/21/2018 c5 BlazinWolf
Wow what an interesting story and poor forward to see how this how it will go between Kushina and Minato. Brilliant story so far keep it up! _.
Wow what an interesting story and poor forward to see how this how it will go between Kushina and Minato. Brilliant story so far keep it up! _.
5/11/2018 c3 Mysteria
I want to keep reading, what a good fic! Obito has always been one of my favorite characters due to how complex he is. You do such a great job writing about his inner turmoil, please don’t ever stop writing this! I cant wait to read more. Good job!
I want to keep reading, what a good fic! Obito has always been one of my favorite characters due to how complex he is. You do such a great job writing about his inner turmoil, please don’t ever stop writing this! I cant wait to read more. Good job!
5/11/2018 c3
4Milye6
I'm surprised there are so less reviews for this story!
The idea is really interesting, I haven't seen much good fics of this idea and your's have a good start. There aren't any tripping grammar mistakes that I could see, which makes reading it all the more enjoyable. I like how you described Obito's mental state.

I'm surprised there are so less reviews for this story!
The idea is really interesting, I haven't seen much good fics of this idea and your's have a good start. There aren't any tripping grammar mistakes that I could see, which makes reading it all the more enjoyable. I like how you described Obito's mental state.
10/3/2017 c2 Ikahorse
Seem this story would be a great but if you would please continue with this and please for love of God update sooner!
Seem this story would be a great but if you would please continue with this and please for love of God update sooner!