for What the Heart Hides4/26 c3 
1pearl037
Heeeeyyy! I started this over because I saw you updated, and I wanted the full effect.I just wanted to say that I LOVED the tension you created with Pocahontas being high and recalling pieces of dialogue from the first film and then juxtaposing that situation with John’s opium induced ramblings. It was all very well done, and I’m excited to get to the most recent chapters. Even as an adult, I very much enjoy disappearing into this world for a while. Here’s to more!
1pearl037Heeeeyyy! I started this over because I saw you updated, and I wanted the full effect.I just wanted to say that I LOVED the tension you created with Pocahontas being high and recalling pieces of dialogue from the first film and then juxtaposing that situation with John’s opium induced ramblings. It was all very well done, and I’m excited to get to the most recent chapters. Even as an adult, I very much enjoy disappearing into this world for a while. Here’s to more!
3/30 c9 1TotallyVocaded
Is it a holiday or something? I couldn't have expected a continuation to one of my favourite stories, and now I see this delight! Can't wait for more ️
1TotallyVocadedIs it a holiday or something? I couldn't have expected a continuation to one of my favourite stories, and now I see this delight! Can't wait for more ️
2/17 c1 EvelynGrace09
Hey,
I Don't how to express it sincerely but ur Your writing has a way of pulling the reader in—I couldn’t help but visualize it as I read. As an artist, it sparked ideas, and I’d love to explore a possible collaboration.
(Please Note) If you're truly interested then, let’s chat! If not, no worries—just reply "No."
[ Contact info] :
Discord: evelyngrace_08
Email: evelyngrace001
Instagram/Portfolio: evelyn_grace033
Best,
Evelyne-Grace
Hey,
I Don't how to express it sincerely but ur Your writing has a way of pulling the reader in—I couldn’t help but visualize it as I read. As an artist, it sparked ideas, and I’d love to explore a possible collaboration.
(Please Note) If you're truly interested then, let’s chat! If not, no worries—just reply "No."
[ Contact info] :
Discord: evelyngrace_08
Email: evelyngrace001
Instagram/Portfolio: evelyn_grace033
Best,
Evelyne-Grace
2/7 c2 Guest
I COULDN'T HOLD IT, SORRY, so I read it today, BUT I'LL READ IT AGAIN TOMORROW! And, my God... I DIDN'T KNOW THAT POCAHONTAS HIGH ON OPIUM WAS ALL I NEEDED, like, I LAUGHED SO MUCH! What a BRILLIANT idea! I LAUGHED SO MUCH, SERIOUSLY! And it was so SO cute, her going back and forth, all disoriented, poor thing, and mixing John Smith with John Rolfe in the lines, and John Smith trying to avoid her and her real feelings about him, and him trying to control himself when she kissed him by accident because she was disoriented... OH HOW WONDERFUL! MY GOD I LOVED THIS CHAPTER! I felt like I was watching a romantic comedy movie, omg
I COULDN'T HOLD IT, SORRY, so I read it today, BUT I'LL READ IT AGAIN TOMORROW! And, my God... I DIDN'T KNOW THAT POCAHONTAS HIGH ON OPIUM WAS ALL I NEEDED, like, I LAUGHED SO MUCH! What a BRILLIANT idea! I LAUGHED SO MUCH, SERIOUSLY! And it was so SO cute, her going back and forth, all disoriented, poor thing, and mixing John Smith with John Rolfe in the lines, and John Smith trying to avoid her and her real feelings about him, and him trying to control himself when she kissed him by accident because she was disoriented... OH HOW WONDERFUL! MY GOD I LOVED THIS CHAPTER! I felt like I was watching a romantic comedy movie, omg
10/29/2022 c8 TotallyVocaded
Please don't tell me that's it! If it's not going to be their wedding and travel back to Jamestown where Smith could become a governor (I appreciate the historical touch and the research you did, wow), I'm gonna kill myself xD or maybesit down and write another chapters for your story xD
BTW Rolfe was no diplomat at all, just a farmer and a widower, so f..ck him and the sequel.
Please don't tell me that's it! If it's not going to be their wedding and travel back to Jamestown where Smith could become a governor (I appreciate the historical touch and the research you did, wow), I'm gonna kill myself xD or maybesit down and write another chapters for your story xD
BTW Rolfe was no diplomat at all, just a farmer and a widower, so f..ck him and the sequel.
7/21/2022 c8 Cinnamon
I love this story! I hope you update soon!
I love this story! I hope you update soon!
5/26/2022 c8 176HC247
I was so excited to see for the update for this, you have no idea.
But Good Lord, I legit want to shake John throughout the entire first half. Dude literally has the girl of his dreams in his house and he's too lost in his own thoughts and fears to realize what's going to happen if he'd just shut up and let it. You wrote it perfectly
I told you think before, but the orange thing was kind of hot and I'm here for it.
And the ending! Freakin flipping finally! Leave it to Pocahontas to get Smith out of his head and down on...you know what, never mind.
Loved it all-definetly worth the wait!
Looking forward to more!
176HC247I was so excited to see for the update for this, you have no idea.
But Good Lord, I legit want to shake John throughout the entire first half. Dude literally has the girl of his dreams in his house and he's too lost in his own thoughts and fears to realize what's going to happen if he'd just shut up and let it. You wrote it perfectly
I told you think before, but the orange thing was kind of hot and I'm here for it.
And the ending! Freakin flipping finally! Leave it to Pocahontas to get Smith out of his head and down on...you know what, never mind.
Loved it all-definetly worth the wait!
Looking forward to more!
4/15/2022 c1 Eli Grant
omg, this is the best Pocahontas fanfic I've ever found. Trank you for this! And pleasee update, I need to know what happens!
omg, this is the best Pocahontas fanfic I've ever found. Trank you for this! And pleasee update, I need to know what happens!
4/11/2022 c8 1typewriter33
I have been hoping you would continue this story! Loving it. Looks like her engagement to Rolfe is off, and she is now engaged to Smith. She never really spoke up and told Rolfe she realized that he took her silence for agreement.
1typewriter33I have been hoping you would continue this story! Loving it. Looks like her engagement to Rolfe is off, and she is now engaged to Smith. She never really spoke up and told Rolfe she realized that he took her silence for agreement.
4/9/2022 c8 mrko
Your fanfic is incredibly good!
Your fanfic is incredibly good!
4/7/2022 c8 15Azalea542
Chapter 8 was hot. I wish it had been marital sex rather than fornication, but at least it was loving. I was also bothered by the idea of John Smith having used the services of whores previously. I'm the kind that prefers both the man and the woman come into their consummation night both being virgins. I realize your way is realistic to human nature, though. But since Smith is a Disney character from a G rated movie, I'd kind of think he didn't have sexual sins in his past.
15Azalea542Chapter 8 was hot. I wish it had been marital sex rather than fornication, but at least it was loving. I was also bothered by the idea of John Smith having used the services of whores previously. I'm the kind that prefers both the man and the woman come into their consummation night both being virgins. I realize your way is realistic to human nature, though. But since Smith is a Disney character from a G rated movie, I'd kind of think he didn't have sexual sins in his past.
3/4/2022 c7 1typewriter33
Frankincense, lavender, sandalwood, mmmm ... and the stock Exchange. Love it.
1typewriter33Frankincense, lavender, sandalwood, mmmm ... and the stock Exchange. Love it.
10/9/2020 c7 13babyb26
Forgive me for taking so long in posting this review, life has been crazy! This is such a wondeful continuation of your story! You already know that I can't wait for the next chapter! I love your story concept and writing! Very well done and I look forward to reading more very soon!
13babyb26Forgive me for taking so long in posting this review, life has been crazy! This is such a wondeful continuation of your story! You already know that I can't wait for the next chapter! I love your story concept and writing! Very well done and I look forward to reading more very soon!
3/8/2020 c7 176HC247
Mhmm'kay lady, you've waited 84 years for this stinking review and your been endlessly patient with me while my life was in shamble the last few weeks, so I hope this makes up for it...
The conversation on the way to the party was really well done. Another session of learning more about each other and cultures-very reminiscent of colors of the winds and the riverbank conversation here.
Alaric might be a new fave, tbh. I love the personality you've given him from the way her observes Smith and Pocahontas's exchanges to his cheeky interruption of their (first) kiss of the evening. I was smiling every time he appeared! I hope you'll keep him around!
speaking of our favorite couple, this chapter really pushed the relationship forward freaking finally, woman! Haha. The dancing to the kiss(es!) and the way you write them is just delicious and I'm loving every moment.
I am curious as to how you'll wrap everything up, but I guess we'll just have to keep reading. Well done!
176HC247Mhmm'kay lady, you've waited 84 years for this stinking review and your been endlessly patient with me while my life was in shamble the last few weeks, so I hope this makes up for it...
The conversation on the way to the party was really well done. Another session of learning more about each other and cultures-very reminiscent of colors of the winds and the riverbank conversation here.
Alaric might be a new fave, tbh. I love the personality you've given him from the way her observes Smith and Pocahontas's exchanges to his cheeky interruption of their (first) kiss of the evening. I was smiling every time he appeared! I hope you'll keep him around!
speaking of our favorite couple, this chapter really pushed the relationship forward freaking finally, woman! Haha. The dancing to the kiss(es!) and the way you write them is just delicious and I'm loving every moment.
I am curious as to how you'll wrap everything up, but I guess we'll just have to keep reading. Well done!