for What the Heart Hides6/20/2019 c5 
1pearl037
I like this. I like it a lot. It took me a while to get used to the very British voice that your characters and narrator have, but I like the tension, and I LOVE the present tense description of John Smiths recovery. I felt that. Truly. :) I saw that you updated at the end of May. Maybe you'll post at the end of this month too? Would love to see where this goes!
1pearl037I like this. I like it a lot. It took me a while to get used to the very British voice that your characters and narrator have, but I like the tension, and I LOVE the present tense description of John Smiths recovery. I felt that. Truly. :) I saw that you updated at the end of May. Maybe you'll post at the end of this month too? Would love to see where this goes!
6/5/2019 c5 173HC247
Goodness, it's taken me forever and a day to get this to you and I've read this thing like five times by now, but I am HERE and I am EXCITED!
This was probably my favorite chapter to date for myriad reasons. I know I've said I adore Eva, but this just was the icing on the cake for me. I love when John showed up and she was like "NO, you must eat with us." and basically dragged him inside. She's such a mom and I wouldn't have her any other way. I love how she tried to knock some sense into both of their stubborn heads.
Also, can we talk about John here? The poor guy is so awkward and mumbly- It's amazing. "You look nice" and "the whole "decent carriage" bit. I will admit to LOLing at those(even if maybe you didn't mean for that, I found it charming and it amused me. I'm simple. What can I say?). In fact, the entire carriage ride was awkward and of course, makes for some of the best parts. So fun! (for us, not them XD)
And that kiss? The first one may have been a mistake (read: "mistake"), but homegirl can't try that excuse with the second. Nope. That was intentional and I loved every second of it. And John's right path line in response? Dead, dead. I am dead and it is your fault.
The end! John is such a cheeky devil with his packages and smiles and sauntering, all dramatic and such. He knows very well what he's doing, doesn't he?
Bottom line: I love this. I think it's one of my favorite things you've written and you need to update soon because I need my happy ending and I need it asap.
173HC247Goodness, it's taken me forever and a day to get this to you and I've read this thing like five times by now, but I am HERE and I am EXCITED!
This was probably my favorite chapter to date for myriad reasons. I know I've said I adore Eva, but this just was the icing on the cake for me. I love when John showed up and she was like "NO, you must eat with us." and basically dragged him inside. She's such a mom and I wouldn't have her any other way. I love how she tried to knock some sense into both of their stubborn heads.
Also, can we talk about John here? The poor guy is so awkward and mumbly- It's amazing. "You look nice" and "the whole "decent carriage" bit. I will admit to LOLing at those(even if maybe you didn't mean for that, I found it charming and it amused me. I'm simple. What can I say?). In fact, the entire carriage ride was awkward and of course, makes for some of the best parts. So fun! (for us, not them XD)
And that kiss? The first one may have been a mistake (read: "mistake"), but homegirl can't try that excuse with the second. Nope. That was intentional and I loved every second of it. And John's right path line in response? Dead, dead. I am dead and it is your fault.
The end! John is such a cheeky devil with his packages and smiles and sauntering, all dramatic and such. He knows very well what he's doing, doesn't he?
Bottom line: I love this. I think it's one of my favorite things you've written and you need to update soon because I need my happy ending and I need it asap.
5/28/2019 c5 Megan Lyle
Wow! This is a dramatic, shocking, romantic, and awesome chapter! Keep writing.
Wow! This is a dramatic, shocking, romantic, and awesome chapter! Keep writing.
5/28/2019 c5 1twillight forever
Damn I love these two. Looks like they will get together in the end!
Now if she could just break it gently to Rolfe ...
1twillight foreverDamn I love these two. Looks like they will get together in the end!
Now if she could just break it gently to Rolfe ...
10/26/2018 c4 Huge fan
You are an incredibly talented writer! This story is amazing! I really do hope you continue to write this story, I cannot wait to find out what happens next.
You are an incredibly talented writer! This story is amazing! I really do hope you continue to write this story, I cannot wait to find out what happens next.
9/3/2018 c4 Guest14-15
Will you update really soon? Because you are very good at writing fanfic!
Will you update really soon? Because you are very good at writing fanfic!
7/3/2018 c4 Guest
Dear Sunrise19,
So happy to hear that my reviews encouraged you so. Do keep up the good work, this was a wonderful transition chapter, and I hope that you keep finding inspiration in your writing! Looking forward to the next chapters here and also the conclusion of Before Dawn.
-Guest
Dear Sunrise19,
So happy to hear that my reviews encouraged you so. Do keep up the good work, this was a wonderful transition chapter, and I hope that you keep finding inspiration in your writing! Looking forward to the next chapters here and also the conclusion of Before Dawn.
-Guest
6/27/2018 c4 173HC247
Yes, I know. I'm late. I'm sorry. BUT I AM HERE AND HAVE READ YE CHAPTER!
Ahem...sorry.
Well, this may be a filler chapter, but it's an important one. Looks like somethings are starting to come back to memory here (you should also know I'm very much resisting the urge to break into Celine Dion-esque song "It's All Coming Back to Me" right now).
I think I've said this before, but I really like Eva. She's such a mom and the way she cares for Pocahontas and still calls her out are such "mom" things. Hopefully she'll continue to set her straight in all matters..lol
Great update! Can't wait to read more!
173HC247Yes, I know. I'm late. I'm sorry. BUT I AM HERE AND HAVE READ YE CHAPTER!
Ahem...sorry.
Well, this may be a filler chapter, but it's an important one. Looks like somethings are starting to come back to memory here (you should also know I'm very much resisting the urge to break into Celine Dion-esque song "It's All Coming Back to Me" right now).
I think I've said this before, but I really like Eva. She's such a mom and the way she cares for Pocahontas and still calls her out are such "mom" things. Hopefully she'll continue to set her straight in all matters..lol
Great update! Can't wait to read more!
6/24/2018 c4 15Azalea542
Glad to see you're back! I had given up nagging you for new chapters! ;) Whatever it was going on in your life I hope it wasn't too tragic and things get better for you. You are a good writer, but there is one point on which you could improve: I am not always sure which character is speaking. I look forward to more chapters!
15Azalea542Glad to see you're back! I had given up nagging you for new chapters! ;) Whatever it was going on in your life I hope it wasn't too tragic and things get better for you. You are a good writer, but there is one point on which you could improve: I am not always sure which character is speaking. I look forward to more chapters!
6/24/2018 c4 Megan Lyle
This is a awesome chapter. Keep writing.
This is a awesome chapter. Keep writing.
6/20/2018 c3 Guest
PLEASE CONTINUE "WHAT THE HEART HIDES"!
PLEASE CONTINUE "WHAT THE HEART HIDES"!
5/10/2018 c3 Guest
This is such a good story, I do hope you continue it soon.
This is such a good story, I do hope you continue it soon.