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1/17/2017 c2 173HC247
Yay for updates!

One of my favorite things in this chapter was the slight nuances that reveal deeper truths, especially the fact that Ansgar was the one who treated John in the first place. Great plot touch. Speaking of Ansgar, he's certainly no fool and not afraid tog et under John's skin a bit. I love that. He deserves to squirm a bit.

And that sneaky kiss! You had to go there, didn't you? And that last line? Gah, I love it all.

Wonderful job as always. Looking forward to more!
1/17/2017 c2 Megan Lyle
This is a awesome and romantic chapter! You should update it more often.
1/12/2017 c1 Guest
Please update soon! Ouch, she will probably need stitches. But John will be there to comfort her.
1/4/2017 c1 Guest
:) :) :) :)
12/31/2016 c1 Guest
This is great; please continue writing. I can't wait to learn more about Eva and Ansgar-did they treat John's old wound on arrival back in England?

HAPPY 2017!
12/14/2016 c1 Guest
I love this, and I have a feeling that it will be really sweet and very feel-good. I can't wait until you update. I check every day!
12/12/2016 c1 Guest
LOVING IT PLEASE CONTINUE
12/12/2016 c1 HC247
Yay! So happy to see you were able work out some details and get this started!

I love this already! The meeting between Smith and Pocahontas doesn't seem too contrived or forced and the following event flow very nicely. Of course she would get left alone with him and you're making us wait for the good stuff, but I suppose I'll forgive you.

Patricia seems...nice. If not a little chatty. I like Eva, personally.

Great start and I'm so excited so see a new story from you. More soon please!
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