for A New Adventure6/30/2019 c3 mallarieTwinkies
this story is really cool can't wait for the next chapter keep going you're doing great
this story is really cool can't wait for the next chapter keep going you're doing great
4/21/2018 c3 
41love2be4gotten
Beautiful ending on this one haha, I loved it! The mama scenario was absolutely adorable, and kudos to you! I look forward to future chapters!
41love2be4gottenBeautiful ending on this one haha, I loved it! The mama scenario was absolutely adorable, and kudos to you! I look forward to future chapters!
4/21/2018 c2 love2be4gotten
The chapter was short but sweet. I feel like it lacked a bit of emotion in this one, maybe a it needed more sensual detail.
The chapter was short but sweet. I feel like it lacked a bit of emotion in this one, maybe a it needed more sensual detail.
4/21/2018 c1 love2be4gotten
Good start, the details are good and I can picture the scene quite well. A bit on the short side though.
Good start, the details are good and I can picture the scene quite well. A bit on the short side though.
2/27/2018 c3 ricebunny88
This is a different take on a Naruto/Inuyasha cross over that I haven't read yet! I'm excited!
This is a different take on a Naruto/Inuyasha cross over that I haven't read yet! I'm excited!
2/21/2018 c3 1YaoiTora
There are somethings I might not have know about in the anime or it’s just merely a twist that’s throwing me off.
I don’t know if the well does close... or if Shippo calls Kagome mom. It’s funny though, I wish Koga was in this story because that would make me happy. My cat’s name is Koga (because my bf and I are serious Inuyasha fans and weirdos xD)
Anyway, this is getting very good. I like it. Four thunbs up from me~! :D
1YaoiToraThere are somethings I might not have know about in the anime or it’s just merely a twist that’s throwing me off.
I don’t know if the well does close... or if Shippo calls Kagome mom. It’s funny though, I wish Koga was in this story because that would make me happy. My cat’s name is Koga (because my bf and I are serious Inuyasha fans and weirdos xD)
Anyway, this is getting very good. I like it. Four thunbs up from me~! :D
10/4/2017 c4 LibraAera2110
Honnêtement, c'était une excellente idée de réécrire cette fiction. Il y a beaucoup plus de détails, l'écriture est beaucoup plus soignée. Personnellement, j'aimerais bien un Kagome / Gaara pour cette fiction! Aprés tout, Kagome n'a pas de préjugés envers les démons et Gaara a besoin de quelqu'un qui l'accepte pour qui il est! En tous cas, j'ai vraiment hâte d'être au prochain chapitre. Bon courage pour la suite, bye!
Honnêtement, c'était une excellente idée de réécrire cette fiction. Il y a beaucoup plus de détails, l'écriture est beaucoup plus soignée. Personnellement, j'aimerais bien un Kagome / Gaara pour cette fiction! Aprés tout, Kagome n'a pas de préjugés envers les démons et Gaara a besoin de quelqu'un qui l'accepte pour qui il est! En tous cas, j'ai vraiment hâte d'être au prochain chapitre. Bon courage pour la suite, bye!