for Four in the Attic, One in the Kitchen5/20/2020 c17 Guest
That was an amazing end to a amazing story! I just have one question if it isn’t to much. Could you write a chapter about what happens next? Is it more in line with the book series or does it change now that the dollanganger siblings didn’t lose Cory, have another (older) sibling to look after them and weren’t exposed to the poison as long as im canon? I think that Cory’s survival and preventing further poisining would save Carrie both mentally and appareance like. And maybe with Camille both Chris and Cathy’s relationship would become more like that of siblings or at least be better resolved and in turn that would make that maybe Cathy wouldn’t run in abusive relationships and run away from the family. I don’t know the possibilities are endless. The odds are in their favor, but they still went through some traumatising things and Camille is still young. Also she didn’t live with them in the attic and that might cause a bit of a rift. What are you thoughts?
That was an amazing end to a amazing story! I just have one question if it isn’t to much. Could you write a chapter about what happens next? Is it more in line with the book series or does it change now that the dollanganger siblings didn’t lose Cory, have another (older) sibling to look after them and weren’t exposed to the poison as long as im canon? I think that Cory’s survival and preventing further poisining would save Carrie both mentally and appareance like. And maybe with Camille both Chris and Cathy’s relationship would become more like that of siblings or at least be better resolved and in turn that would make that maybe Cathy wouldn’t run in abusive relationships and run away from the family. I don’t know the possibilities are endless. The odds are in their favor, but they still went through some traumatising things and Camille is still young. Also she didn’t live with them in the attic and that might cause a bit of a rift. What are you thoughts?
8/6/2019 c16 Guest
I really hate the grandmother. That spiteful woman.
I really hate the grandmother. That spiteful woman.
3/3/2019 c15 Rayrayrawrs
I love this story so much. You are a amazing writer there's not that many good flowers in the attic stories.
I love this story so much. You are a amazing writer there's not that many good flowers in the attic stories.
2/24/2019 c15 
10Egs
Great chapter! Glad Camilla can help her siblings. Congrats about college! Write on!
10EgsGreat chapter! Glad Camilla can help her siblings. Congrats about college! Write on!
1/31/2019 c14 Guest
Please update!
Please update!
12/5/2018 c14 Guest
I really hate that woman. I am curius what your theorie is. Who poisoined the Dollanganger children and why.
I really hate that woman. I am curius what your theorie is. Who poisoined the Dollanganger children and why.
8/14/2018 c13 Elena
Another great chapter. You should consider writing as a career! Hope the next one comes soon, Write on
Another great chapter. You should consider writing as a career! Hope the next one comes soon, Write on
7/25/2018 c11 3TheDarlingDoll
I absolutely love this story! What you've created here is not only very original, but you've also done it in a way where the main protagonist doesn't feel overbearing or like she's completely disrupting the original plot either. Hell, if it wasn't because a fifth Dollanganger child definitely doesn't exist, it would almost be an extremely plausible story. The way you capture the other character's voices is also very impressive, definitely hard to do with an OC being the narrator but you've done it quite well. I could almost hear Cathy the way I did in the novel when she had that little outburst with Camilla/Lucy. I cannot wait to see what else you have in store!
3TheDarlingDollI absolutely love this story! What you've created here is not only very original, but you've also done it in a way where the main protagonist doesn't feel overbearing or like she's completely disrupting the original plot either. Hell, if it wasn't because a fifth Dollanganger child definitely doesn't exist, it would almost be an extremely plausible story. The way you capture the other character's voices is also very impressive, definitely hard to do with an OC being the narrator but you've done it quite well. I could almost hear Cathy the way I did in the novel when she had that little outburst with Camilla/Lucy. I cannot wait to see what else you have in store!
6/26/2018 c11 EGS
Another great chapter! I hope you have her go to the police and expose the mother and grandmother! Make them take a blood test. Keep writing !
Another great chapter! I hope you have her go to the police and expose the mother and grandmother! Make them take a blood test. Keep writing !
5/19/2018 c1 Me
By the way, the twins would be 7 by chapter 10. They turned 5 shortly before they all went to Foxworth Hall. They were 8 by the time they left. Cathy was 15 and Chris was 17, nearing his 18th birthday. They were in the attic for three years, four months and sixteen days.
Just finished reading the book and I'm on here looking for fan fiction. You've left some stuff out but its okay. I like this story. I read it all in one go.
By the way, the twins would be 7 by chapter 10. They turned 5 shortly before they all went to Foxworth Hall. They were 8 by the time they left. Cathy was 15 and Chris was 17, nearing his 18th birthday. They were in the attic for three years, four months and sixteen days.
Just finished reading the book and I'm on here looking for fan fiction. You've left some stuff out but its okay. I like this story. I read it all in one go.