for Four in the Attic, One in the Kitchen10/27/2017 c8 Guest
That Nick at first sounded sweet but now...
Anyway love to see where this will go
That Nick at first sounded sweet but now...
Anyway love to see where this will go
510/18/2017 c7 Guest
What will chamge with a fifth Dollanganger?
What will chamge with a fifth Dollanganger?
8/24/2017 c7 Guest
I also think Olivia must have been manipulation Corrine.
I also think Olivia must have been manipulation Corrine.
8/23/2017 c7 Guest
You use Olivia's and Malcolm's names. The one used in Garden of Shadows. But you said that Camille looks like Olivia. Don't you include that book? I wouldn't blame you. What always bothered me about that book that most, if not all is not written by Andrews, but her ghostwriter. It makes you wonder what Andrews intentions and ideas were and what not.
You use Olivia's and Malcolm's names. The one used in Garden of Shadows. But you said that Camille looks like Olivia. Don't you include that book? I wouldn't blame you. What always bothered me about that book that most, if not all is not written by Andrews, but her ghostwriter. It makes you wonder what Andrews intentions and ideas were and what not.
8/21/2017 c7 Guest
Cory is so sweet. It's so sad he dies. And Corrine is like I expected. I always suspected that she loved her children, but was spoilt and enjoyed her new life to escape her sadness from het husbands death and her responsibility for her children.
Cory is so sweet. It's so sad he dies. And Corrine is like I expected. I always suspected that she loved her children, but was spoilt and enjoyed her new life to escape her sadness from het husbands death and her responsibility for her children.
8/13/2017 c6 Guest
Great. Very realistic. Corrine is very in characters, although I don't understand the grandmother. Why isn't she being mean to Camille?
Great. Very realistic. Corrine is very in characters, although I don't understand the grandmother. Why isn't she being mean to Camille?
8/12/2017 c6 Elena
Another awesome chapter! Keep writing, anxious to know what happens next
Another awesome chapter! Keep writing, anxious to know what happens next
7/29/2017 c5 Guest
That grandfather is a big hypocrite. I wonder how Camilles present will change the story. Maybe she can soften her grandmother and stop her mother from doing the things she did in the novel.
That grandfather is a big hypocrite. I wonder how Camilles present will change the story. Maybe she can soften her grandmother and stop her mother from doing the things she did in the novel.
7/18/2017 c4 Guest
OMG! this is amazing! I have just one question: What does the grandfather think happend to Camille? He knew Corrine was pregnant, so...
OMG! this is amazing! I have just one question: What does the grandfather think happend to Camille? He knew Corrine was pregnant, so...
7/16/2017 c4 Heather
This is really good! Usually OC-centric stories aren't very good, but you made it work. You also write very well. I didn't see any spelling mistakes.
This is really good! Usually OC-centric stories aren't very good, but you made it work. You also write very well. I didn't see any spelling mistakes.