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6/13 c18 TheGoodDoctor13
What's up with Naruto "removing his mask"? In the beginning he wasn't wearing a mask at all, it was explained that the teachers just changed his tests and failed him etc. Now it's saying Naruto has always been hiding his skills when the last 16 chapters has shown that isn't true since he's been training to get this strong
6/13 c17 TheGoodDoctor13
Ehh if you're gonna kill Neji at least have him turn into a hollow or something, he's definitely the type to give into hatred in this story
6/13 c16 TheGoodDoctor13
Why have Neji be revealed as someone who killed Hinata mom? Timeline dosent add up and is pretty unnecessary already
6/12 c9 TheGoodDoctor13
I get the Sakura bashing and all, that's pretty common but Naruto was particularly brutal in this chapter to her. Breaking her arm I can get but then crippling her womb and legs? That's entirely ooc even in your own story, it just came out of nowhere
5/24 c2 Valuta
Is this chapter supposed to be set in a different month than the first? This way it seems as if eleven months have passed.
5/24 c44 HyperA2019
Looking forward to Chapter 45.
5/19 c44 Guest
Itachi could let his daughter sign the Crow Summoning Contract before he leaves
5/6 c2 Mnchblackname
NICE chapter bro
5/4 c1 Mnchblackname
NICE chapter
5/4 c44 1UzumakiRamen
Absolutely loving your story! Can't wait for the next chapter! What happened with the ghosts of Hashirama and Tobirama?
5/4 c44 jeremiahkelley93
Great chapter.
5/3 c44 bigdog21
Loved it. The interaction for Itachi and Aisha felt really good to read. Can't wait to see more and how ino mom and dad react at the dinner.
5/2 c44 Borello
great work
5/2 c44 SPark681
Hmm, seems a very interesting chapter and glad Itachi got to meet his daughter hopefully something can be done to allow Itachi to visit without issues anyways keep up the great work!
5/1 c44 Darth revan1998
Excellent job keep up the good work.
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