for From ninja to shinigami7/13/2017 c6 
38Tonlor
interesting chapter. not sure what to think about the sword princess thing. but i like the idea that Danzo had a hand in Uzu's destruction.
38Tonlorinteresting chapter. not sure what to think about the sword princess thing. but i like the idea that Danzo had a hand in Uzu's destruction.
7/12/2017 c2 Tonlor
forgot to review the first chapter. So i'll just do both here.
First chapter: Good start but i think you missed a couple of chances for Naruto and Sakura to have interactions that help Naruto see that they will never be rather than just having him see the light that is Hinata. other than that good chapter.
Second Chapter: very good. interesting way to bring in some Bleach using Mayuri. I think i might understand why you used him but i think this would've fit more into Urahara or even Hikifune's territory.
forgot to review the first chapter. So i'll just do both here.
First chapter: Good start but i think you missed a couple of chances for Naruto and Sakura to have interactions that help Naruto see that they will never be rather than just having him see the light that is Hinata. other than that good chapter.
Second Chapter: very good. interesting way to bring in some Bleach using Mayuri. I think i might understand why you used him but i think this would've fit more into Urahara or even Hikifune's territory.
6/19/2017 c1 9Dragon1990
Has a lot of potential, I like it. Little bit depressing at the beginning with how mean everyone is but I'm glad he's got some people looking out for him. Very interested in seeing where the story goes, keep up the great work.
9Dragon1990Has a lot of potential, I like it. Little bit depressing at the beginning with how mean everyone is but I'm glad he's got some people looking out for him. Very interested in seeing where the story goes, keep up the great work.
6/15/2017 c7 Dracoessa
I hope that the elders get ripped 100,000,000,000 ways to Sunday.
I hope that the elders get ripped 100,000,000,000 ways to Sunday.
6/15/2017 c6 Dracoessa
Don't wanna piss off a woman, especially if she could tear you 10 ways to Sunday.
Don't wanna piss off a woman, especially if she could tear you 10 ways to Sunday.
6/3/2017 c6 21HyperA1985
I am looking forward to chapter 7 and I hope Naruto kills Kakashi with the rasengan.
21HyperA1985I am looking forward to chapter 7 and I hope Naruto kills Kakashi with the rasengan.