for From ninja to shinigami3/6/2017 c7 marquis.shax
oh come on I just spent the time reading 6 chapters and now find this is just a stupid authors note :(. Ugh I guess I'll add this to my follow list and HOPEFULLY you'll actually update this story soon
oh come on I just spent the time reading 6 chapters and now find this is just a stupid authors note :(. Ugh I guess I'll add this to my follow list and HOPEFULLY you'll actually update this story soon
2/25/2017 c1 Nogs28
Try starting from the beginning instead of a flashback that keeps going after barely a paragraph
Try starting from the beginning instead of a flashback that keeps going after barely a paragraph
2/25/2017 c7 
3night-fang223
This story is awesome I can't wait for the next chapter although when Naruto's zanpakto said she was going to ask you a question I instantly thought of Monty Python and the holy Grail
3night-fang223This story is awesome I can't wait for the next chapter although when Naruto's zanpakto said she was going to ask you a question I instantly thought of Monty Python and the holy Grail
2/21/2017 c6 thanatos's-shadow
I almost skipped over this chapter because it was getting to be a pain to read. The grammar is horrible. There are instances of different people speaking in the same paragraph with no indication of the change in speaker. Let alone any indication that there's a conversation going on. There are also words being used in places they shouldn't be (I.e are instead of our). While your first 5 chapters weren't the most sophisticated I've read they were much better than this chapter. I will probably still read this story due to the fact Hinata-chan and Ino-chan are listed as main characters.
I almost skipped over this chapter because it was getting to be a pain to read. The grammar is horrible. There are instances of different people speaking in the same paragraph with no indication of the change in speaker. Let alone any indication that there's a conversation going on. There are also words being used in places they shouldn't be (I.e are instead of our). While your first 5 chapters weren't the most sophisticated I've read they were much better than this chapter. I will probably still read this story due to the fact Hinata-chan and Ino-chan are listed as main characters.
2/21/2017 c6 NyaNyaKittyFace
How did the grammar get worse?! The story is good for the most part, it'd be better if you'd stop putting pointless things in it. The letters, the recaps, and such are not needed. We already read it as it happened. We don't need to read a summary of the events.
How did the grammar get worse?! The story is good for the most part, it'd be better if you'd stop putting pointless things in it. The letters, the recaps, and such are not needed. We already read it as it happened. We don't need to read a summary of the events.
2/18/2017 c7 Guest
Me want the next chapter already whaaaa!
Me want the next chapter already whaaaa!