for From ninja to shinigami2/21/2017 c6 NyaNyaKittyFace
How did the grammar get worse?! The story is good for the most part, it'd be better if you'd stop putting pointless things in it. The letters, the recaps, and such are not needed. We already read it as it happened. We don't need to read a summary of the events.
How did the grammar get worse?! The story is good for the most part, it'd be better if you'd stop putting pointless things in it. The letters, the recaps, and such are not needed. We already read it as it happened. We don't need to read a summary of the events.
2/18/2017 c7 Guest
Me want the next chapter already whaaaa!
Me want the next chapter already whaaaa!
2/19/2017 c6 Delta3950
Your beta must be the Grammar type, you kind of misspelled Kushina's name her at the end: "Krishna".
Your beta must be the Grammar type, you kind of misspelled Kushina's name her at the end: "Krishna".
2/19/2017 c1 Delta3950
You want to know what I'd love to see Jacke? Due to Sasuke and Kakashi being tardy, said Uchiha is disqualified, they show up during Naruto's match against Gaara, Naruto asks Gaara if he'd mind if Naruto broke the Uchiha a little just for a little fun if you will. With Mayuri's mind he might be able to create a clone of Sasuke that isn't an arrogant ass. However while I would so love to see Sasuke getting his limbs broken in a beat down, I can respect if it does not happen due to a dislike of needless violence. However I do have an idea that isn't excessive force, due to seals that block the Sharingan's perception ability, Naruto humiliates the Uchiha by constantly slapping him in the face, and tripping him before lightly punting him into the wall.
You want to know what I'd love to see Jacke? Due to Sasuke and Kakashi being tardy, said Uchiha is disqualified, they show up during Naruto's match against Gaara, Naruto asks Gaara if he'd mind if Naruto broke the Uchiha a little just for a little fun if you will. With Mayuri's mind he might be able to create a clone of Sasuke that isn't an arrogant ass. However while I would so love to see Sasuke getting his limbs broken in a beat down, I can respect if it does not happen due to a dislike of needless violence. However I do have an idea that isn't excessive force, due to seals that block the Sharingan's perception ability, Naruto humiliates the Uchiha by constantly slapping him in the face, and tripping him before lightly punting him into the wall.
2/18/2017 c7 
2Teddy Vanderaa
This is very intersting can ask is naruto going to learn his mother chakara chains or his father jutsu on he training time in the wave and can i sugest have Kain teach naruto how to fight with is zanpakuto. Can narutolearn ice release from haku
2Teddy VanderaaThis is very intersting can ask is naruto going to learn his mother chakara chains or his father jutsu on he training time in the wave and can i sugest have Kain teach naruto how to fight with is zanpakuto. Can narutolearn ice release from haku
2/16/2017 c1 Guest
Naruto is the unofficial T-800 Terminator
Naruto is the unofficial T-800 Terminator
2/16/2017 c7 Guest
O man i was expecting chapter 7 & 8! just when its getting intereting..
O man i was expecting chapter 7 & 8! just when its getting intereting..
2/17/2017 c2 nero99
Interesting story! I always felt Naruto should've interacted with his fellow vessels more.
Interesting story! I always felt Naruto should've interacted with his fellow vessels more.
2/15/2017 c1 lol
Great job keep it up
Great job keep it up
2/15/2017 c1 narutoxhinata
I can see the difference in your different betas hope this new One stays with you
I can see the difference in your different betas hope this new One stays with you