for From ninja to shinigami10/21/2024 c1 
6Rankin de Merthyr
I'm cringing at the first chapter at character assassination of Team 7 and forced appearance of so many people coming in to save Naruto. However at the 5k likes and follows, I'll try an assume the author gets better down the line.
6Rankin de MerthyrI'm cringing at the first chapter at character assassination of Team 7 and forced appearance of so many people coming in to save Naruto. However at the 5k likes and follows, I'll try an assume the author gets better down the line.
10/14/2024 c2 Admiral Ackbar
‘“Normally I'd make a dozen clones to help me search the building, but I have to start acting smart." He whispered to himself and began with the doors, searched the entire building in about two hours and found many interesting rooms.” - I get Naruto is trying to make better choices, but in this case, sending a bunch of clones to search the place is the correct choice. It would be much faster, and safer. Shadow clones are a reconnaissance jutsu in the first place.
Also Mayuri Kurotsuchi is extremely out of character here. There’s no way in hell he would leave his knowledge behind to help someone else out. If it was Kisuke Urahara it’d be much more believable.
‘“Normally I'd make a dozen clones to help me search the building, but I have to start acting smart." He whispered to himself and began with the doors, searched the entire building in about two hours and found many interesting rooms.” - I get Naruto is trying to make better choices, but in this case, sending a bunch of clones to search the place is the correct choice. It would be much faster, and safer. Shadow clones are a reconnaissance jutsu in the first place.
Also Mayuri Kurotsuchi is extremely out of character here. There’s no way in hell he would leave his knowledge behind to help someone else out. If it was Kisuke Urahara it’d be much more believable.
9/24/2024 c41 Guest
Because I'm a binge reader I read from 34 to chapter 40 and I got to say it was a slow build but the cliffhanger for chapter 40 was worth the wait dude this is a great literary piece of work although it was a slow build to ask the environment and the world building respectfully can't be mad at the outcome of what I'm looking at great job
Because I'm a binge reader I read from 34 to chapter 40 and I got to say it was a slow build but the cliffhanger for chapter 40 was worth the wait dude this is a great literary piece of work although it was a slow build to ask the environment and the world building respectfully can't be mad at the outcome of what I'm looking at great job
9/21/2024 c45 Animeworld2.0
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9/20/2024 c34 1MERK FOX
Naruto, when ever he’s in proximity to older single women “chuckles I’m in danger”
1MERK FOXNaruto, when ever he’s in proximity to older single women “chuckles I’m in danger”
9/4/2024 c45 Borello
nice work
nice work
8/6/2024 c45 guest
Most of us kinda forgotten that the parents are still alive and now we get to see them again.
Most of us kinda forgotten that the parents are still alive and now we get to see them again.
8/5/2024 c45 Guest
her is an name for Kakashi for Kushina to call him by Bakashi
her is an name for Kakashi for Kushina to call him by Bakashi