for Start Again11/1/2019 c1 Guest
Please update, it's a great story - J
Please update, it's a great story - J
1/28/2017 c3 NOT.AN.ACCOUNT123
The chapter was good but I think you need to make Clary more mentally ill. Maybe she could have hallucinations or nightmares that she wakes up screaming from. Stuff like that to make her less of a Mary-sue
The chapter was good but I think you need to make Clary more mentally ill. Maybe she could have hallucinations or nightmares that she wakes up screaming from. Stuff like that to make her less of a Mary-sue
12/27/2016 c3 mintybith
Amazing chapter! I feel happy for clary!
Dont worry your good.. I can help you if you need a beta :)
My fAV present was a book :) (cliche ik but i love reading)
Please update soon..:)
Amazing chapter! I feel happy for clary!
Dont worry your good.. I can help you if you need a beta :)
My fAV present was a book :) (cliche ik but i love reading)
Please update soon..:)
12/26/2016 c3 sophiecampbellbower
Loved it! Is Jonathan going to be good or bad? I think I'd like to see both... well I don't know.
Please update soon!
Ps. My favorite present was a cotton candy machine. I don't know why anyone would give me a cotton candy machine for Christmas but I don't care cause I GOT A FREAKING COTTON CANDY MACHINE!
Loved it! Is Jonathan going to be good or bad? I think I'd like to see both... well I don't know.
Please update soon!
Ps. My favorite present was a cotton candy machine. I don't know why anyone would give me a cotton candy machine for Christmas but I don't care cause I GOT A FREAKING COTTON CANDY MACHINE!
12/26/2016 c3 
1WeirdACE
OK so you said that Clary was a teenager, right? But like how old exactly is she?
1WeirdACEOK so you said that Clary was a teenager, right? But like how old exactly is she?
12/21/2016 c2 Guest
Why the fuck are you posting here? Are you retarded? Yes you are! You're an attention seeking asshole.
Why the fuck are you posting here? Are you retarded? Yes you are! You're an attention seeking asshole.
12/19/2016 c2 4bayloo7
any story with mac and cheese is a good story. I like the character development going on here. The layout is alright its kinda easy to lose your place while reading but honestly its not that big of a problem. as long as the story is there I'm content
4bayloo7any story with mac and cheese is a good story. I like the character development going on here. The layout is alright its kinda easy to lose your place while reading but honestly its not that big of a problem. as long as the story is there I'm content
12/19/2016 c1 bayloo7
absolutely love how the story is going and will have to check out your others! since you asked for criticism here's a my one :) you had some grammar mishaps but that's all I noticed!
absolutely love how the story is going and will have to check out your others! since you asked for criticism here's a my one :) you had some grammar mishaps but that's all I noticed!