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12/14/2016 c1 1MattPac
Nice little story.
Are you going to go further with these ideas though? Because you introduce some ideas in here that could be explored further, like Queen Bee.
If I may make a suggestion, and this isn't a criticism of your writing method, I would leave out the bracketed ending because I think readers can pick up on these details on their own. At least I did.
Regardless, good work. May the force be with you. Live long and prosper. They may take our lives, but they'll never take our freedom!

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