for Borealis6/19/2018 c1 
1drbackspace
arora borealis
at this time of year
at this time of day
in this part of the country
localized entirely in ur kitchen
1drbackspacearora borealis
at this time of year
at this time of day
in this part of the country
localized entirely in ur kitchen
10/5/2017 c7 6PastelBabe
Even if you are in the process of redoing the chapters, I am highly impressed with your writing and well thought out au of Warframe! As a fellow author, I really do hope that you can continue, and maybe even collaborate in the future! Much love - ambecca
6PastelBabeEven if you are in the process of redoing the chapters, I am highly impressed with your writing and well thought out au of Warframe! As a fellow author, I really do hope that you can continue, and maybe even collaborate in the future! Much love - ambecca
4/10/2017 c10 KayurstTheLokiPrime
I don't know, I mean, there is a lot of stuff im unsure of. Mainly stuff like anatomy (On the fact of Warframe are in a form a puppet.) and other small things, but all in all it's a good story so far. Some of the people I am not sure who they are, like Cal, who due to the claws I would assume is Valkyr. I would like to see this going with either maybe the Lotus getting torn down, the first 3 Primes getting torn down, with the assumption that the last one be Loki however (which it is most likely due to it being the original third choice before Volt) however, I kinda wanna see the Loki be a comedic kind of guy who would really just not give ten flying fucks, much like Amp.
I don't know, I mean, there is a lot of stuff im unsure of. Mainly stuff like anatomy (On the fact of Warframe are in a form a puppet.) and other small things, but all in all it's a good story so far. Some of the people I am not sure who they are, like Cal, who due to the claws I would assume is Valkyr. I would like to see this going with either maybe the Lotus getting torn down, the first 3 Primes getting torn down, with the assumption that the last one be Loki however (which it is most likely due to it being the original third choice before Volt) however, I kinda wanna see the Loki be a comedic kind of guy who would really just not give ten flying fucks, much like Amp.
3/15/2017 c7 2Ivara the Froggo
I read this over twice in one day! I love the characters' personalities and the setting. Nice job and keep up the good work
2Ivara the FroggoI read this over twice in one day! I love the characters' personalities and the setting. Nice job and keep up the good work
2/12/2017 c5 Humberto768
Keep writing. It is not usual to see such amazing writting- please continue this intrigan story
Keep writing. It is not usual to see such amazing writting- please continue this intrigan story
12/29/2016 c1 a random reader
I like where this story went... but i stopped reading after the moment i read: "I was freezing. That wasn't normal." Being in a state of "freezing" is not considered normal automatically... this made me feel real uncomfortable. And gave me the impression reading "the sun is hot" would be somewhere further down the story...
So no, i didn't get far. my apologies...
I like where this story went... but i stopped reading after the moment i read: "I was freezing. That wasn't normal." Being in a state of "freezing" is not considered normal automatically... this made me feel real uncomfortable. And gave me the impression reading "the sun is hot" would be somewhere further down the story...
So no, i didn't get far. my apologies...
12/30/2016 c3 4phantoka72
oooooooooO oh how I love and hate cliff hangers can't wait for the next chapter to come out :)
4phantoka72oooooooooO oh how I love and hate cliff hangers can't wait for the next chapter to come out :)