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8/11/2020 c249 S10MC2015
The end.
Or not.

Life goes on. Stories die on the internet.
And oh boy have I seen many.

Most die a silent death slowly falling into obscurity.
And some keep going on.
And people will find this story. But they should atleast know that this is dead for a reason and not just abandoned with the promise of "an update soon".

So I thank you for giving closure.

I only read your story once and I don't even remember properly anymore.

Yet I am here saying goodbye to this story.

I am happy this story existed or I wouldn't have been able to talk to all of you in the discord and have that bit of fun.

And even though I didn't read much:
Thank you for the notice.
Thank you for the chapter!
Thank you for the chapters!
Thank you for the story!

And goodbye KoC.
6/16/2020 c248 7Alewar Warinot
I already read your previous chapters and though it is true it is long and hard to catch up it doesn't mean it isn't worth the entire read. I still like to go back a 100 chapters ago to read on what you have done that I found funny.
I think it is better just moving forward. The chapters are short and easy to understand. It took me like 3 days of nonstop reading to catch up to 184 (Latest chapter at the time) and I can say with all honesty that the people who don't read from the start aren't losing out to what they can read 30 or 40 chapters into the future.
Like I said, it is fine to clean your previous work but moving forward is more important. And if you have to add something new that is relevant in the past then just post sidestory that ties it into KOR instead.
6/15/2020 c248 1R3qu13m0f50ul5
I'd go with whichever feels the best to you as the author.

I would personally say that when you really start to see a passion project as a chore or a mistake then it might be time to take the lessons learned here and improve the quality of your next project.
6/14/2020 c248 PCHeintz72
I started reading this way back when I think chapter 3 was new.

I actually quite liked the original initial chapters and first story arcs... I thought the initial setup promising, an I actually thought it fine until just past the Agnus arc with her declaring loyalty to main character and New Divide... relationships could have deepened from there.

Quite frankly I liked the idea at that point that it seemed (to me at least) it was almost going in the direction of a Agnus/Henriatta/David relationship, and perhaps saving others along the way... but that was not to be.

I liked that, but I think the main problem is after that you went in so many directions that you muddied the waters so to speak and made the story harder to follow. Multiple plot lines intriduced, and David distancing himself from Agnus/Henrietta.

Also, while the shorter chapter format worked initially, as it allowed you to release chapters fast, you later slowed down, seemingly right when things got more complex, negating any benefit and fustrate readers as we then had to get used to a whole slew of new characters and massive changes from canon plot all at once.
6/14/2020 c248 TOWTWUKER
The fact ur asking us like this makes me think u already know what you want to do. Yes, this has had it's moments of confusion. However, no story should be incomplete. My personal view is, do what you think is a good idea. That being said, I'd find it a bit, not disappointing, but, something along those lines, for u to quit now. Good luck with your decision.
6/13/2020 c247 navyfield90
1. David should've never told anyone about being a meta
2. Siesta's family and noboru story is just nonsense
3. David needs to die for good if he won't go back to earth

I'm sorry, but I think this story has fallen into the category of "clusterfuckism".
Very original and creative but it breaks the main lore too much you might as well made a completely new fantasy world.
6/9/2020 c15 3SidJ
So I looked up the porn you talked about. It wasnt very good, nor was did it have anything of national secrets even if this world was real. Couldn't someone have just drawn a pron parody of thew queen and her knight? Saito isnt even real in your universe.

I'm getting off here, 15 chapters in, and nothing new or unique. No interesting interactions or reactions, just the anime only more boring somehow. I hope somebody smashes his guitar, it still hasn't been tied into the story or character development and its just there to remind you he is an SI because nothing else about him acts like one.

As a guitar player myself, is that the only thing interesting about your character? because it seems like it.
6/9/2020 c14 SidJ
I honestly hope you have something planned for this story arc because a random porn book that could be a parody becoming something of national importance is a very cracky story arc. And so far the humor in this story has been nonexistent. Can anyone even understand English? So why is this a big deal?
6/9/2020 c12 SidJ
This chapter was cringe fanfiction. Some dude is being held as a slave by a foreign noble and he's talking with his sword, not about future plans and how to gather resources and protection or avenues of magic that can take him back, instead, they are discussing possible romances with his slave master and some cute girl he's never met. Like its already guaranteed that they might find him attractive. And the sword acts like him not seeing the girl's status is a good thing or a guarantee that they will work out.

Is your character a pretty boy? Ugly or normal looking? Did he have a girlfriend? And on that topic does he miss his job/school. Does he miss his relationships? Is he fine without tv and ac?

Like most fanfics the SI doesnt feel like a 3d person. He so un-reactive to anything that happens around him.
6/9/2020 c8 SidJ
I can't wait for the master to break his guitar and force him to actually show anger.
6/9/2020 c5 SidJ
Your SI has a very meek personality so its hard for me to connect with him. Im usually a fan of tricksters or brutes in personality. But he has enough mentions of leaving in the future that Im willing to stay and see if he does anything unexpected.
6/9/2020 c4 SidJ
This chapter shows a little bit more agency in the thoughts of the SI.
6/9/2020 c3 SidJ
Not really seeing much to have any respect or expectations from your SI. A very go with the flow kinda guy, not very funny and seems to have no desire or control over his situation. No signs of being very smart either.
6/9/2020 c1 SidJ
The survival kit was so unbelievable it kicked me out of the story. Please come up with a more believable reason to have it. maybe just a regular small first aid kit or say it was a leftover from a camping trip that he never ended up needing?
6/9/2020 c247 TOWTWUKER
Happy birthday
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