for The King of Commoners5/2/2020 c25 Aot guest
Did... Did you just refer to attack on Titan with the walls being the names of David's little sisters? I'm not convinced if you say no.
Did... Did you just refer to attack on Titan with the walls being the names of David's little sisters? I'm not convinced if you say no.
4/27/2020 c243 Guest
What happened to all the chapters post 243?
What happened to all the chapters post 243?
4/14/2020 c249 navyfield90
You've live long enough to become the villain yourself, David. You betrayed your cause of returning home.
You've live long enough to become the villain yourself, David. You betrayed your cause of returning home.
4/7/2020 c249 EiNyx
18? Since when the hell would age matter for a pseudo-medieval system? What a weird time to insert your modern values in.
18? Since when the hell would age matter for a pseudo-medieval system? What a weird time to insert your modern values in.
3/26/2020 c248 DovahkiinGod
There's a reason author's rarely switch to flashbacks and massive background story's on characters within their books. What you should have done is wrote a side story with all the extra details and background information because you derailed your story massively. You see, every time you do a flashback your quickly halting progress in the plot plus, with all the extra world building... well not everyone cares about it so like I said it's best to offer all that as a side story or a historical timeline. This story isn't bad, in fact I really enjoyed everything leading up until the last arc. This is just some advice I thought may help you in the future. You can also try writing the flashbacks in more present tenses such as a another character speaking about what happened verbally and focusing on the more important details.
There's a reason author's rarely switch to flashbacks and massive background story's on characters within their books. What you should have done is wrote a side story with all the extra details and background information because you derailed your story massively. You see, every time you do a flashback your quickly halting progress in the plot plus, with all the extra world building... well not everyone cares about it so like I said it's best to offer all that as a side story or a historical timeline. This story isn't bad, in fact I really enjoyed everything leading up until the last arc. This is just some advice I thought may help you in the future. You can also try writing the flashbacks in more present tenses such as a another character speaking about what happened verbally and focusing on the more important details.
3/20/2020 c247 
1Snappy Flowah
why the flip even is happening in this story?! It looks convoluted as all heck.
In short; me no likey.
~Snappy~
1Snappy Flowahwhy the flip even is happening in this story?! It looks convoluted as all heck.
In short; me no likey.
~Snappy~
2/23/2020 c144 Yuuki Sachs
Ah, there you are, Chekhov.
Ah, there you are, Chekhov.
2/8/2020 c5 yeah
corrosive liquid...yep ı would have killed that b*tch in her sleep
corrosive liquid...yep ı would have killed that b*tch in her sleep
2/8/2020 c3 yeah
david: lets follow cannon for now
me : do you hear the people sing...
david: lets follow cannon for now
me : do you hear the people sing...
1/27/2020 c72 Yuuki Sachs
How to confuse Sheffield:
Just encrypt all messages.
How to confuse Sheffield:
Just encrypt all messages.
1/21/2020 c1 GhostDT
Yeah, this story is just the author aiming to fulfill as much of his fantasies as possible. His logic for being treated like a doormat is shitty. No one, born with dignity and respect, would willingly allow himself to be a doormat because the way she turned out wasn’t her fault. That reasoning too is bullshit. Sure, events, actions and people change our lives but only because we allow them. Louise is a bitch. No realistic person finds a short, flat, temperamental child with a per-chant for BDSM cute. That’s bullshit.
Yeah, this story is just the author aiming to fulfill as much of his fantasies as possible. His logic for being treated like a doormat is shitty. No one, born with dignity and respect, would willingly allow himself to be a doormat because the way she turned out wasn’t her fault. That reasoning too is bullshit. Sure, events, actions and people change our lives but only because we allow them. Louise is a bitch. No realistic person finds a short, flat, temperamental child with a per-chant for BDSM cute. That’s bullshit.