for The King of Commoners12/21/2016 c4 Guest
I hate Louise in every single fanfic, such a terrible character.
I hate Louise in every single fanfic, such a terrible character.
12/20/2016 c4 
3MasterXMaster
This fic is interesting. I'm curious to see where you want it to go. Just remember that Louise in the light novels was not so cruel with Saito as she was in the Anime. And that Saito pratically screamed "Hit me!" from the start acting like a complete moron. Thank you for sharing your story.
3MasterXMasterThis fic is interesting. I'm curious to see where you want it to go. Just remember that Louise in the light novels was not so cruel with Saito as she was in the Anime. And that Saito pratically screamed "Hit me!" from the start acting like a complete moron. Thank you for sharing your story.
12/19/2016 c3 Blackholelord
Great to see the updates, if David is familiar with what is coming, than he can counter the headaches that will follow.
Great to see the updates, if David is familiar with what is coming, than he can counter the headaches that will follow.
12/19/2016 c1 Fuf
Another self insert hmmh
Another self insert hmmh
12/18/2016 c2 3truefortune
You have gotten my attention but is there more characters in the harem? Also would it nice to post the song links in each chapter? I'd like to hear what you have chosen.
3truefortuneYou have gotten my attention but is there more characters in the harem? Also would it nice to post the song links in each chapter? I'd like to hear what you have chosen.
12/16/2016 c1 Guest
Short. Too short to judge.
Protip, with a title like The KING of commoners, you might be careful, because people, me included, might expect better than a vulgar OC with no power whatsoever stand in.
Short. Too short to judge.
Protip, with a title like The KING of commoners, you might be careful, because people, me included, might expect better than a vulgar OC with no power whatsoever stand in.
12/16/2016 c1 3Zandaino-Nova-Ari
Tuned- not toned, and that's how my normie OC gets 'dragged' into Halkeginia
3Zandaino-Nova-AriTuned- not toned, and that's how my normie OC gets 'dragged' into Halkeginia