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9/21/2019 c220 Guest
Any chance you would have a fic under a different nane set aside for lemons for this story? Even if you don't, would you be okay with someone else writing some?
9/11/2019 c219 Guest
Karin needs a chill pill STAT.
9/11/2019 c219 Guest
Did expansion just do way more damage than they realize? He could use it for crowd control if he dials it back by a majority of its force. A direct hit on a crowd would likely result in fatalities.
9/9/2019 c217 Guest
Really could have phrased that better than "She just fisted me a few times." Sounds perverted.
9/9/2019 c210 Guest
It is a myth that broken bones can heal back stronger. They actually become more brittle, but can also become thicker. This doesn't necessarily make them stronger, but it can allow more muscles to grow and make the limb stronger in terms of force output. The problem lies in the fact that there have been cases where people have made the mistake of assuming that just because the arm has more muscle the bone is tougher. Because the bone is actually more brittle, there have been times where people have accidentally used the extra muscles to snap the more brittle bone. Many things are made worse instead of better due to ignorant assumptions. It is likely the treatments that were used at the time of the Black Plague that caused a good portion of the deaths. Treating ribs like this would only serve to make them more vulnerable. Anatomy, dude. Cartoon physics don't apply.
9/9/2019 c8 Caincrux
Wow this is borderline plagiarism with how slavish he is.
9/9/2019 c7 Caincrux
OH you're gandalfr now huh? Wow, it took 7 chapters for him to realize that. Hell even when he said he watched the anime recently.
9/9/2019 c6 Caincrux
What a load of bullshit.
9/9/2019 c5 Caincrux
. . is your favorite character? You couldn't imagine the show without him when he was like forgotten after enlisting in the army? That guiche? wow
9/9/2019 c4 Caincrux
Oh boy, weabo guitarist who can play anime songs. Plus closet pervert who has no ounce of dignity. At least Saito has an excuse of being an anime character.
9/9/2019 c3 Caincrux
Geez, another doormat
9/4/2019 c219 sad
sad
9/4/2019 c219 joharasbel
take care be safe
9/4/2019 c209 Pyrologicas
Gonna be totally honest here: I have not a single clue what Karin's rule of steel is. I didn't understand at all.
From my perspective she is just accumulating more and more power and knocks anyone down who tries to get stronger. Why is she doing this? What did David understand?
Is it fear? Is she scared that someone might get to her level if she doesn't extinguish their efforts at the beginning? If so that would make Karin paradoxically both the strongest and weakest person on Alfheim at the same time.
Plus: Her "Rule of Steel", whatever it is, actually hurts the country she is supposed to serve. If she had revealed to Louise that Louise is a void-mage from the beginning, Louise would be a considerable war-potential by now, training with void-magic exclusively and knowingly instead of trying and failing at elemental magic the entire time.

To me the Rule of Steel seems alot like a self-fullfilling-prophesy
9/2/2019 c5 Guest
David means "beloved".
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