for Senseless4/26/2017 c1 
1SlippedHalo8186
I loved this, it was quite touching actually.
Jack Dalton, he may not know everything. But he knows the important stuff and he's always got you back. Gotta love Jack
Thanks for writing.
1SlippedHalo8186I loved this, it was quite touching actually.
Jack Dalton, he may not know everything. But he knows the important stuff and he's always got you back. Gotta love Jack
Thanks for writing.
12/29/2016 c1 TMVH50
Nicely done. I love the Jack Dalton character, and I agree with Riley. What you see on the surface with him doesn't do him justice. He has a ton of depth - loyalty, caring, intelligence - that he opts to hide beneath a crusty, tough-guy exterior.
Nicely done. I love the Jack Dalton character, and I agree with Riley. What you see on the surface with him doesn't do him justice. He has a ton of depth - loyalty, caring, intelligence - that he opts to hide beneath a crusty, tough-guy exterior.
12/16/2016 c1 Lhaven
I love your story. Jack really does have everyone's back, and I love that you show him being sweet, kind, thoughtful, and reassuring to Riley. Thanks for writing!
I love your story. Jack really does have everyone's back, and I love that you show him being sweet, kind, thoughtful, and reassuring to Riley. Thanks for writing!