for Where Emma's last name becomes a bit too literal10/13/2017 c14 MiDushiNoSushi
Huh... I didn't see that coming.. Makes sense though that she'd want an appropriate Emma to match her own deviousness...
Huh... I didn't see that coming.. Makes sense though that she'd want an appropriate Emma to match her own deviousness...
10/10/2017 c14 
30bholley
I'm really confused. Everything is jumping around so much I can't tell what's going on. So Henry has no memories - what's wrong with Snow? Is any of that real, cuz it reads kind of like a dream or a cursed memory.
And what does the Queen even want from Regina in the first place? Did I miss that somewhere along the way, or do we not know that yet?
Also, I'm pretty confused about the last scene. Whose body disappeared, if Emma was still there to be copied? And how is Regina able to get to Emma if she's tied up?
I hope all is well for you, but I'm really confused by this story now. Still gonna keep reading, though.
30bholleyI'm really confused. Everything is jumping around so much I can't tell what's going on. So Henry has no memories - what's wrong with Snow? Is any of that real, cuz it reads kind of like a dream or a cursed memory.
And what does the Queen even want from Regina in the first place? Did I miss that somewhere along the way, or do we not know that yet?
Also, I'm pretty confused about the last scene. Whose body disappeared, if Emma was still there to be copied? And how is Regina able to get to Emma if she's tied up?
I hope all is well for you, but I'm really confused by this story now. Still gonna keep reading, though.
9/7/2017 c13 30bholley
And the situation got worse! How can it keep getting worse?! Even if everybody else knew about the Queen, could they even stop her? She seems absolutely limitless. And who got killed this time?! I have nothing but questions. But... if people are dying and their bodies are missing their hearts, but Regina is under lock and key and it can't be her doing (she's got an alibi now), certainly SOMEBODY will suspect something, right? No idea what you've got planned, but I'm for it. (But you're KILLING me with the angst!)
30bholleyAnd the situation got worse! How can it keep getting worse?! Even if everybody else knew about the Queen, could they even stop her? She seems absolutely limitless. And who got killed this time?! I have nothing but questions. But... if people are dying and their bodies are missing their hearts, but Regina is under lock and key and it can't be her doing (she's got an alibi now), certainly SOMEBODY will suspect something, right? No idea what you've got planned, but I'm for it. (But you're KILLING me with the angst!)
9/6/2017 c13 kpop1392as
Damn, well played Evil Queen. She's good...as an actress and manipulator. I enjoyed reading this story. I'm glad that David comforted Regina after a nightmare.
Damn, well played Evil Queen. She's good...as an actress and manipulator. I enjoyed reading this story. I'm glad that David comforted Regina after a nightmare.
9/6/2017 c13 MiDushiNoSushi
Gotta give psycho Regina major points for sheer cruelty and being all outta fcuks to give... The EQ and Regina are such polar extremes, I can see why you're depicting her this way. There's no balance or discretion, both halves are weak in their own unique ways. Regina literally needs to get herself back together or everything will be lost. I gotta say that at least one good thing came of all of this, and that's the loss of our dear captain. Maybe she took Blue next? One could hope... Lol
Gotta give psycho Regina major points for sheer cruelty and being all outta fcuks to give... The EQ and Regina are such polar extremes, I can see why you're depicting her this way. There's no balance or discretion, both halves are weak in their own unique ways. Regina literally needs to get herself back together or everything will be lost. I gotta say that at least one good thing came of all of this, and that's the loss of our dear captain. Maybe she took Blue next? One could hope... Lol
9/6/2017 c13 11LauratheChef
so you just killed off snow and david...or rumple...i am not sure i actually enjoyed this chapter...
11LauratheChefso you just killed off snow and david...or rumple...i am not sure i actually enjoyed this chapter...
9/1/2017 c12 4daughterofOz
How did I miss the word 'Complete', before I started reading this story. Ugh! Too many irons in the fire. Sorry, venting reader that needs to finish her own work. Cheers.
4daughterofOzHow did I miss the word 'Complete', before I started reading this story. Ugh! Too many irons in the fire. Sorry, venting reader that needs to finish her own work. Cheers.
8/28/2017 c11 SpurBoy
The only solution to this problem is to join Regina & the Evil Queen again. Emma has already indicated that something is missing from Regina's personality which she finds a little sad as well as something about the Evil Queen that she is attracted to. If it's only Henry's disgust and dislike of the Evil Queen side of Regina's personality that keeps this option off the table; he needs to get a clue or get out of the way. I don't like leaving the decision in Henry's hands anyway. I think that Emma should force the issue and magically unite the two disparate halves of the once and future evil mayor queen and then explain to Henry that he needs to grow up. Real people aren't annoying Glindas. It is the struggle between competing thoughts and feelings and following through on uncertain resolutions that shape who we our...and Regina's lost that piece of herself. It's not fair. And I like the Evil Queen too! Sorry for the ramble. Thanks for sharing.
The only solution to this problem is to join Regina & the Evil Queen again. Emma has already indicated that something is missing from Regina's personality which she finds a little sad as well as something about the Evil Queen that she is attracted to. If it's only Henry's disgust and dislike of the Evil Queen side of Regina's personality that keeps this option off the table; he needs to get a clue or get out of the way. I don't like leaving the decision in Henry's hands anyway. I think that Emma should force the issue and magically unite the two disparate halves of the once and future evil mayor queen and then explain to Henry that he needs to grow up. Real people aren't annoying Glindas. It is the struggle between competing thoughts and feelings and following through on uncertain resolutions that shape who we our...and Regina's lost that piece of herself. It's not fair. And I like the Evil Queen too! Sorry for the ramble. Thanks for sharing.
8/23/2017 c12 kpop1392as
Oh dear...welp, I hope Emma wakes up soon and that Regina can use light magic.
Oh dear...welp, I hope Emma wakes up soon and that Regina can use light magic.
8/23/2017 c11 kpop1392as
Huh, very interesting that the evil queen chose Hook's heart. Does this mean that another Regina could be spotted elsewhere for an alibi as well? And if there's a different in their magic that maybe Blue could detect?
Huh, very interesting that the evil queen chose Hook's heart. Does this mean that another Regina could be spotted elsewhere for an alibi as well? And if there's a different in their magic that maybe Blue could detect?
8/22/2017 c12 30bholley
Oh my god. Ohhhh my god. Oh my god. Shit just got real. And hit the fan. All at once. (That was my initial visceral reaction.)
How in the world do you write emotion, action AND dialogue all so well?!
The pacing in this chapter was incredible. I love that the beginning was relatively calm with just some internal angst and such sweetness from Snow, SwanEmma and even Leroy. (The faith everyone has in her makes what happens SO much more painful). But then the Queen and the tension ratchets up a notch. I thought that was the most intense it was gonna get but then...
An explosion couldn't have ripped me away from that last scene. My entire inner monologue was nothing but exclamation marks and inarticulate screaming. Oh. My. God. I don't even know how to respond. WHAT?!
30bholleyOh my god. Ohhhh my god. Oh my god. Shit just got real. And hit the fan. All at once. (That was my initial visceral reaction.)
How in the world do you write emotion, action AND dialogue all so well?!
The pacing in this chapter was incredible. I love that the beginning was relatively calm with just some internal angst and such sweetness from Snow, SwanEmma and even Leroy. (The faith everyone has in her makes what happens SO much more painful). But then the Queen and the tension ratchets up a notch. I thought that was the most intense it was gonna get but then...
An explosion couldn't have ripped me away from that last scene. My entire inner monologue was nothing but exclamation marks and inarticulate screaming. Oh. My. God. I don't even know how to respond. WHAT?!